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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
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I love how you describe this piece so inviting of the imagination of the heart and soul respect dear poetess
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I e been paralyzed 6 years I cant remember the last time I came to a beach x loved this piece x
28th Jun 2020 3:24pm
let these dream beaches
be the places where you can be
free to taste the spray
be the places where you can be
free to taste the spray
28th Jun 2020 1:03pm
Oooh, very nice fusion of natural imagery and erotica. Lovely visual, Sweet! :)
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all fours mean plus fours
and pants and trousers and such
are soon discarded
and pants and trousers and such
are soon discarded
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I'll check my kama
and you check your suthra and
we'll both know then - smiles
and you check your suthra and
we'll both know then - smiles
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16th Jul 2020 6:07am
You mate the sublimity of the sea with concupiscence to create a mood for love making. Truly powerful sensual nature poem.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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20th Jul 2020 9:23pm
Must swimsuits obstruct?
Nope, not it the power of the tide is strong enough.
Such an poem of passion and power. I loved it :)
Nope, not it the power of the tide is strong enough.
Such an poem of passion and power. I loved it :)
20th Jul 2020 11:56pm
