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My Heroin(e)
A junky for funky words,
I overdose on prose
In the garden of my mind’s desire.
Playing with poetic fire—
Roach smokin’ in the ash tray.
Led astray by broken verbs
And softly spoken word.
My poetic depiction—
A distinguished
Cunning linguist
With a great ad(diction).
Seeking poetic thrills,
Like sleeping pills
To ease my mind.
Snorting lines
Of the finest rhymes,
To pass the time.
A penny for your thoughts,
I'm a nuisance;
Giving my two cents
For mere nickels and dimes.
Here to pave the way,
With words, I take a stand.
The hero saves the day,
With his heroin(e) at hand.
I overdose on prose
In the garden of my mind’s desire.
Playing with poetic fire—
Roach smokin’ in the ash tray.
Led astray by broken verbs
And softly spoken word.
My poetic depiction—
A distinguished
Cunning linguist
With a great ad(diction).
Seeking poetic thrills,
Like sleeping pills
To ease my mind.
Snorting lines
Of the finest rhymes,
To pass the time.
A penny for your thoughts,
I'm a nuisance;
Giving my two cents
For mere nickels and dimes.
Here to pave the way,
With words, I take a stand.
The hero saves the day,
With his heroin(e) at hand.
Written by
NewBeginnings
Published 27th Jun 2020
Author's Note
A playful, freestyle poem written for the "Poetry Is Dope" competition :)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. My Heroin(e)
27th Jun 2020 2:24pm
Dear NB,
Well done! Really smart piece expressing love for writing with double entrendre for subject matter.
Oh to be so clever...great write, and best of luck in the comp. H🌷
Well done! Really smart piece expressing love for writing with double entrendre for subject matter.
Oh to be so clever...great write, and best of luck in the comp. H🌷
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Re. My Heroin(e)
27th Jun 2020 2:25pm
This poem is oh so up my alley ... wonderfully poeted ... had me enthralled ... start to finish ... wonderful playful write ...
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Re. My Heroin(e)
Oh I love the double entendres...and the occasional pun a delight...and word play is such a satisfaction...well done...amigo. Ely
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Re. My Heroin(e)
27th Jun 2020 5:03pm
Re. My Heroin(e)
27th Jun 2020 7:37pm
no idea why
but this Your spill had my in tears!!
Maybe Your fight touched me more than i wanted to admit?
or
maybe for me,. for times and moments gone...........don't know just coping with what maybes -- the cause.
Wow! Just took a breath! powerful spill for me.............
but this Your spill had my in tears!!
Maybe Your fight touched me more than i wanted to admit?
or
maybe for me,. for times and moments gone...........don't know just coping with what maybes -- the cause.
Wow! Just took a breath! powerful spill for me.............
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Re. My Heroin(e)
27th Jun 2020 8:18pm
I LOVE this spill! Excellent ink!
This is a very clever, creative and compelling piece.
Bravo👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
All the best for the comp! :)
This is a very clever, creative and compelling piece.
Bravo👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
All the best for the comp! :)
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Re. My Heroin(e)
28th Jun 2020 00:56am
Re. My Heroin(e)
28th Jun 2020 6:28am
Wowww this is one of your best, I was admiring the word play and the tribute to poetry and yes poetry is a good addiction like you called it. The title pun was creatively thought up!!! Poetry and prayer are my heroine hero heroin too yayy. Kudos!!!
Plz pleez do read and comment on my newest poem too.
Plz pleez do read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Re. My Heroin(e)
28th Jun 2020 7:23am
Re. My Heroin(e)
28th Jun 2020 12:26pm
Re. My Heroin(e)
Spectacular write. The metaphors are spot on and the flow is perfect. I love this stanza,
"A penny for your thoughts,
I'm a nuisance;
Giving my two cents
For mere nickels and dimes."
At least in my minds eye I see the juxtaposition between the first two common phrases...I associate "a penny..." with a positive desire to know someone's mind. And "my two..." has for me always conmoted an un'asked-for (unsolicited that's
the word) opinion.
Bravo, my friend.
"A penny for your thoughts,
I'm a nuisance;
Giving my two cents
For mere nickels and dimes."
At least in my minds eye I see the juxtaposition between the first two common phrases...I associate "a penny..." with a positive desire to know someone's mind. And "my two..." has for me always conmoted an un'asked-for (unsolicited that's
the word) opinion.
Bravo, my friend.
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Re. My Heroin(e)
29th Jun 2020 2:03pm
Every line is fantastic. I especially like "Playing with poetic fire—
Roach smokin’ in the ash tray.
Led astray by broken verbs
And softly spoken word." Wonderful poem.
Roach smokin’ in the ash tray.
Led astray by broken verbs
And softly spoken word." Wonderful poem.
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Re. My Heroin(e)
30th Jun 2020 4:53pm
This has such a belt to it, it's powerful and travels in so many directions like a vine without losing the original thread. It's really clever packed into few lines. Bravo
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Re. My Heroin(e)
1st Jul 2020 5:02am
NB, this is one of the best pieces for this comp. It's funny, great with wordplay and puns, it's got everything. This is a sure winner.
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Re. My Heroin(e)
2nd Jul 2020 9:52pm
Re. My Heroin(e)
4th Jul 2020 3:00am