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Looking At The Sky
He has never
seen the color of her eyes
in the sunlight.
It sounds crazy sad once said aloud.
Lust, fun yet heartbreaking
when you actually have time
to think about it.
seen the color of her eyes
in the sunlight.
It sounds crazy sad once said aloud.
Lust, fun yet heartbreaking
when you actually have time
to think about it.
Published 26th Jun 2020
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26th Jun 2020 2:05am
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26th Jun 2020 2:47am
you're such a beautiful artist
with your photos and poetry
this heartbreakingly poignant ❤
with your photos and poetry
this heartbreakingly poignant ❤
26th Jun 2020 3:34am
26th Jun 2020 10:36am
Dear N,
His profound loss. Some jerks will always be selfish jerks. Sorry, I digress...(That’s probably mean, right?)
Lust is fun until lust turns into love for one and not the other. Then it’s loss and that’s serious pain. Once again, you’ve nailed an event brilliantly. H🌷
His profound loss. Some jerks will always be selfish jerks. Sorry, I digress...(That’s probably mean, right?)
Lust is fun until lust turns into love for one and not the other. Then it’s loss and that’s serious pain. Once again, you’ve nailed an event brilliantly. H🌷
26th Jun 2020 2:36pm
26th Jun 2020 7:24pm
Amazing nikkimoe ... line breaks are breathtaking ... poignant ... sad ... coupled with such a beautiful vivid picture ... it prepared me for happiness ... but the poem turned on that ... perfectly executed ...
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
28th Jun 2020 1:40pm
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