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You Leave Me Breathless
My love
You are the gentle sail within my wind
The spare air I breathe
A tender whisper in my ear
The next breath I take
The light when my eyes are closed
As you stumble in the reality of my dreams
Your lips coating the warmth of my supple skin
A sturdy body that covets my temple in the throne of ecstasy
I give you my desires unto you wished upon by the stars
You give me the crescent and the moon
Fusing my love, you have me, you send me, you complete me
Your family jewels lassoing the christening space of my Chi
Sinking and sinking in my Sacral Charka
The blissfulness sensations of its captivating, echoes
Submerging in the pleasure of its blissful rains
The spiraling effect of its rapture, it softens me, it mentally comforts me
My love, no doubt, you leave me breathless
I do not own the rights to the song, Negligee by George S. Clinton, playing in the background-SKC
You are the gentle sail within my wind
The spare air I breathe
A tender whisper in my ear
The next breath I take
The light when my eyes are closed
As you stumble in the reality of my dreams
Your lips coating the warmth of my supple skin
A sturdy body that covets my temple in the throne of ecstasy
I give you my desires unto you wished upon by the stars
You give me the crescent and the moon
Fusing my love, you have me, you send me, you complete me
Your family jewels lassoing the christening space of my Chi
Sinking and sinking in my Sacral Charka
The blissfulness sensations of its captivating, echoes
Submerging in the pleasure of its blissful rains
The spiraling effect of its rapture, it softens me, it mentally comforts me
My love, no doubt, you leave me breathless
I do not own the rights to the song, Negligee by George S. Clinton, playing in the background-SKC
Written by
SweetKittyCat5
Published 19th Jun 2020
Author's Note
'Breathless' was an important milestone in my life.
Shankar Mahadevan
Shankar Mahadevan
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Re. You Leave Me Breathless
19th Jun 2020 4:47am
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 9:51pm
Thank you my poet, always for such a sweet and encouraging comment, Have a great evening an engaging upcoming week
Re. You Leave Me Breathless
19th Jun 2020 6:19am
The blend of sex with mysticism is so stirring. Favourite verse for example:
I give you my desires unto you wished upon by the stars
You give me the crescent and the moon
Fusing my love, you have me, you send me, you complete me
Your family jewels lassoing the christening space of my Chi
Sinking and sinking in my Sacral Charka
I give you my desires unto you wished upon by the stars
You give me the crescent and the moon
Fusing my love, you have me, you send me, you complete me
Your family jewels lassoing the christening space of my Chi
Sinking and sinking in my Sacral Charka
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Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 9:55pm
I like your favorite verses, and I am humbly apperceptive you bring them to me bowtied when you recite in grace. thank you. In addition, I am bidding you a spectacular evening and an upcoming week
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
22nd Jun 2020 7:52am
Re. You Leave Me Breathless
19th Jun 2020 8:44am
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 9:58pm
I've read your beautiful and engaging musings my handsome one, and I must confess you stand well on your own, and thank you for reading. Do have a relaxing Sunday and may you be pleased with your upcoming week as well
Re. You Leave Me Breathless
love know i should not be saying this can not be salient any longer you drive me wild reading your writes words hearing that sexy voice I am in love with your mind and every thing about you.
I know that I have not the right to say these things as I must let you know enjoy your Friday
I know that I have not the right to say these things as I must let you know enjoy your Friday
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Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 10:02pm
I am mentally expressed, if such beautiful expression spills from the heart, then it is I who is blessed to have a true friend such as you, and thank you, sincerely. Have a great remaining Sunday, and continue to stay blessed in your dwellings
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 10:38pm
Re. You Leave Me Breathless
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 10:08pm
I am moved by your engaging words, regarding its mirrored reflection from your engaging pen and its awesome written serenades as well, thank you my poetess for reading, and may you have an inspiring evening to continue your soft inspirations, and a blessed upcoming week may it keep you
Re. You Leave Me Breathless
20th Jun 2020 1:18am
Breathless like when you walked into the suite at the Hotel Hermitage Monte-Carlo!
You were breathless then as is your poem. : )
You were breathless then as is your poem. : )
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Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
21st Jun 2020 10:14pm
I am still blushing from your first hello.. and the way your sweetest sentiment caressed my soft skin, thank you my poet, you are a refreshing echo of old that is missed in the moment of time. Please be well in your travels, and may this upcoming week be good unto the humility of your beatiful soul😊
Re: Re. You Leave Me Breathless
22nd Jun 2020 3:44am
Thanks for the Sunday smile. You be well as well my butter rum fascination.
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