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Life description a-z
Abandoned by god from day one.
Blasphemy running through my blood
Cutting board for the lost and lost love
Dreadful bleak worthless existence
Empty soulless waiting to be finished
Feeble minded lacking stability
Grieving waiting for someone to kill me
Heathen the reincarnation of a demon
Insignificant living without reason
Jungle of hatred running through my veins
Keeper of sorrow, the one to blame
Living insanity empty handed in the rain
Meek I’d rather bleed than speak
Needle inch deep poisoning me
Oppressed negativity leaks, while
Pain feeds the demon that sleeps
Quivering insomniac beneath sheets
Remnants of happiness sealed within
Sadness unveiled by cut wrists
Trivial the absolute opposite of bliss
Undeniable blob of adopted filth
Valueless wayste of space
Withering away
X’s and O’s memories that fade
Young but witnessed most
Zombie awaiting deaths approach
Blasphemy running through my blood
Cutting board for the lost and lost love
Dreadful bleak worthless existence
Empty soulless waiting to be finished
Feeble minded lacking stability
Grieving waiting for someone to kill me
Heathen the reincarnation of a demon
Insignificant living without reason
Jungle of hatred running through my veins
Keeper of sorrow, the one to blame
Living insanity empty handed in the rain
Meek I’d rather bleed than speak
Needle inch deep poisoning me
Oppressed negativity leaks, while
Pain feeds the demon that sleeps
Quivering insomniac beneath sheets
Remnants of happiness sealed within
Sadness unveiled by cut wrists
Trivial the absolute opposite of bliss
Undeniable blob of adopted filth
Valueless wayste of space
Withering away
X’s and O’s memories that fade
Young but witnessed most
Zombie awaiting deaths approach
Published 18th Jan 2012
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18th Jan 2012 9:12am
use of the alphabet OctoberArts. I like that, but you are a bit hard on yourself. :D
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- Edited 18th Jan 2012 9:38pm
18th Jan 2012 7:58pm
Yes It is depressing, and it is sad that you see yourself that way....But so well written
24th Jan 2012 9:26am
I agree with the two of them, you are rather hard on yourself. This was a good entry for the contest though, very nice work.
31st May 2012 1:40am
the negative view displays honesty n self awareness. still pretty dark. the a-z format has forced you into a writing duty ... true expression thrives in uncharted waters, that is where genuine discovery will find you. as an exercise in writing; good effort
