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Summer Rain
Somber pains hide carefully,
Behind a stoic mountain face—
With a crooked smile that always seems
Just a little out of place.
Summer rain, scratch the surface,
Sink beneath my aching skin;
Soothing cracks and pains
that wrack my brain.
Moving mountains deep within.
I lift my arms and let it drip,
Let the waters wash away the pain.
Let the gentle rain upon my lips
Eclipse the winter’s icy bane.
Stripped of all my sorrow,
Redemption seeps into my marrow;
Singing songs of a new tomorrow,
Chirping like a chipping sparrow!
Behind a stoic mountain face—
With a crooked smile that always seems
Just a little out of place.
Summer rain, scratch the surface,
Sink beneath my aching skin;
Soothing cracks and pains
that wrack my brain.
Moving mountains deep within.
I lift my arms and let it drip,
Let the waters wash away the pain.
Let the gentle rain upon my lips
Eclipse the winter’s icy bane.
Stripped of all my sorrow,
Redemption seeps into my marrow;
Singing songs of a new tomorrow,
Chirping like a chipping sparrow!
Author's Note
A collaboration with Summerrain75 :)
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Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 5:46am
You learn to learn forgiveness even if you let the person go in the rain. Great poem both of you. Keep on writing.
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10th Jun 2020 8:07am
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10th Jun 2020 8:09am
Thank you, Nikki ❤️ you're a sweetheart!!
As always, thanks so much for the kind words and support 🙏
As always, thanks so much for the kind words and support 🙏
Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 7:20am
Re: Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 8:11am
Awww, thanks LilDragonFly,
Thank you for being who you are!! You are a big inspiration to me with your beautiful writings... Which you seem to churn out so seamlessly. Much love to you ❤️
Thank you for being who you are!! You are a big inspiration to me with your beautiful writings... Which you seem to churn out so seamlessly. Much love to you ❤️
Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 7:41am
Thanks NewB for the collab ☺ It was an honor to collab with you. I only added a little input.🙂❤
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Re: Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 8:13am
Awww, Summer, don't be modest 😁
Without your contributions, in writing and in heart, this poem would not have been possible! ❤️ Thank you!
Without your contributions, in writing and in heart, this poem would not have been possible! ❤️ Thank you!
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10th Jun 2020 8:33am
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10th Jun 2020 12:44pm
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11th Jun 2020 7:38am
I appreciate those kind words, friend! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it... It was fun to write :)
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13th Jun 2020 11:53am
Re. Summer Rain
10th Jun 2020 11:29pm
Very cleansing Feel to this spill
while reading.
i could feel and see the cool and the wet.
Nicely done, the both of You
while reading.
i could feel and see the cool and the wet.
Nicely done, the both of You
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Re. Summer Rain
11th Jun 2020 11:15pm
Great collaboration, completely agree with Tallen's comment. You can really feel it.
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Re. Summer Rain
12th Jun 2020 3:31am
The rain always washes away the pain from yesterday... forgiveness is a new beginning
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2020 8:13pm
I found this uplifting to read. Thanks.
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2020 2:04am
Wowzers! This is seamless.......I didn’t realize I was reading a collab till the end. BRAVO!!!! You wrote together beautifully........I felt the sadness all the way thru......tipping my pen in respect to you both.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Summer Rain
2nd Jul 2020 10:02pm
I really enjoyed the stanza structure, and the positive twist at the end was welcoming.
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