Moral Compass

I really like this Wally. Best of luck in the competition.

Thanks Elena (and for adding to your RL).
Yes, I like it too. I loved the title font to go with the picture.

This is a wonderful contender for the competition. Beautifully designed visual, Wally :)
...and since you asked for honest critique, it's nearly perfect, though there is a small typo - "togeher"
Anyway, keep up the great writing, friend, and best of luck in the comp!

Hi NB, thanks for adding to your RL and pointing it out. I went ahead and fixed it.

It's one my visual favorites as of lately. These comps are the best.

Dear W,

What else to say? Totally echo the above comments!  This write sums it up. If we listen to our Jiminy Cricket’s I would like to hope a lot of this messy world wouldn’t be so messy. This is a very clever and cool visual piece. Wishing you the best of luck in the comp. H🌷

Thank you Honoria (and for adding to your RL).
It's become one of my favorite visual poems as of lately.

We should always listening to that little voice inside our heads leading us in the right direction. I guess I never thought of Jiminy in that sense.