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Sum Of The Outcome
Our greatest lessons are ascertained via losses
Only the strong survive to thrive on like bosses
The cost is steep as we weep over the slain
Searching our brains for answers to ease the pain
Trying to refrain from going down a destructive path
Suffering and hurting from living as an empath
Doing the math on the beaten path of the situation
Knowing the sum of the outcome from prior equations
Only the strong survive to thrive on like bosses
The cost is steep as we weep over the slain
Searching our brains for answers to ease the pain
Trying to refrain from going down a destructive path
Suffering and hurting from living as an empath
Doing the math on the beaten path of the situation
Knowing the sum of the outcome from prior equations
Published 4th Jun 2020
| Edited 5th Jun 2020
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5th Jun 2020 2:26am
Consider my comment on your piece "Knowing" valid for this one too.
Simply a great writer/ poet.
Simply a great writer/ poet.
5th Jun 2020 1:08pm
Nicely composed as it reflects the depth of the times we live in now respect brother poet
6th Jun 2020 1:15pm
I must agree Sir Damon
Same Shit, Different Day
Until government officials convict and execute killers who wear badges nothing will really change
Same Shit, Different Day
Until government officials convict and execute killers who wear badges nothing will really change
11th Jun 2020 1:09pm
11th Jun 2020 12:56pm
Top notch flow... incredible, really. It holds a powerful message too... really great writing friend!
11th Jun 2020 1:08pm
Anonymous
11th Jun 2020 4:24pm
Excellent rhyming and consonance riveting this into a tight metallic sculpture.
12th Jun 2020 00:01am
Powerful write and great rhyme scheme. It conveys so much of the struggle most people have inwardly but we're all in control of our decisions and actions.
8th Jul 2020 6:00pm
I read this right after commentating on your on your other contribution where I expressed regrets of participating in violent civil disobedience perpetrated during my youth.
Thank you for these wise words of restraint.
Thank you for these wise words of restraint.
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30th Aug 2021 8:08pm
Quite possibly but history speaks for itself. We come to expect certain outcomes based off of previous sums that habitually happened. An unforeseen variable would be an anomaly.
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