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They Were Like Smoke
The ghosts were analog,
everything is digital.
Now It really is just the wind or
the old house settling.
Dead really is dead in
this new, old world.
everything is digital.
Now It really is just the wind or
the old house settling.
Dead really is dead in
this new, old world.
Published 28th May 2020
Author's Note
My photo of a Bjorn Wiinblad plate
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28th May 2020 5:35am
Dear N,
The ghosts were analog. They didn’t make the digital cut? What’s this world come to?
On the flip side of this insightful poem, I love the colors and subjects of your photo. Great write! H🌷
The ghosts were analog. They didn’t make the digital cut? What’s this world come to?
On the flip side of this insightful poem, I love the colors and subjects of your photo. Great write! H🌷
28th May 2020 5:48am
I haven't seen or felt a ghost in years.
Thought it strange. Perhaps we grow out of fearing things we cant see because real life can be so treacherous? Who knows 😄
Thank you H
Thought it strange. Perhaps we grow out of fearing things we cant see because real life can be so treacherous? Who knows 😄
Thank you H
28th May 2020 12:11pm
Loss of childhood fears ... Excellent write ... Saw your comment , often one just has to stretch out with ones soul to confer with 'ghosts' ... Peace and quiet helps and Wi-Fi unnecessary lol ... Bless and love ... ..
28th May 2020 1:10pm
28th May 2020 2:11pm
This is a little heartbreaking... the things we no longer see or bother to feel, well done nikki
28th May 2020 3:26pm
28th May 2020 8:03pm
31st May 2020 11:43am
Mindfulness, awareness are essential in evaluating “ ghosts “. Hauntings take many forms Nick! 🙏
20th Jun 2020 2:38am
Nik, this poem is nominated in Poem of the month.
It's awesome and I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
It's awesome and I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
20th Jun 2020 3:50am
Thank you! Much appreciated. But I dont kiss enough ass to win anything around here, but I do appreciate you 😘😘😘
5th Oct 2020 4:36am
