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Anymore
“I don’t love you anymore”, You said
with intent to hurt me
But your words
fell to the ground
lifeless, flat
with no impact
“It pains me to say that” you add
selling me sincerity
expecting me to buy that
Anymore? I laughed
That implies you did, before...
But love has never lived in your heart
It’s too dark and calloused
for love to settle in
Too icy and cold
for love to bloom
Any love that manages to
seep in through the cracks
Is quickly sucked dry of all life
By the venomous narcissism
running through your veins
Love for you is,
what you can gain
Demanding an endless reserve
to nourish your every need.
However, you over indulge,
there’s never enough
And without reciprocation,
love never gets nurtured
or replenished,
leaving love to dry up
and wither away
Given I’ve cut off your access
to my abundant well
It’s understandable,
your use for me may have changed
If you were being honest,
you would’ve said,
“I don’t need you anymore”
And for the sake of accuracy,
I would’ve respected that.
with intent to hurt me
But your words
fell to the ground
lifeless, flat
with no impact
“It pains me to say that” you add
selling me sincerity
expecting me to buy that
Anymore? I laughed
That implies you did, before...
But love has never lived in your heart
It’s too dark and calloused
for love to settle in
Too icy and cold
for love to bloom
Any love that manages to
seep in through the cracks
Is quickly sucked dry of all life
By the venomous narcissism
running through your veins
Love for you is,
what you can gain
Demanding an endless reserve
to nourish your every need.
However, you over indulge,
there’s never enough
And without reciprocation,
love never gets nurtured
or replenished,
leaving love to dry up
and wither away
Given I’ve cut off your access
to my abundant well
It’s understandable,
your use for me may have changed
If you were being honest,
you would’ve said,
“I don’t need you anymore”
And for the sake of accuracy,
I would’ve respected that.
Written by
Lazy_Dead
(.Julia.)
Published 27th May 2020
| Edited 9th Mar 2025
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Re. Anymore
27th May 2020 11:37pm
Some don't have the courage to love and only take until they are done taking... painful as it always is, it never sits right... quality write
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Re: Re. Anymore
27th May 2020 11:40pm
So painfully true! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I enjoy it
Re. Anymore
27th May 2020 11:48pm
I really like this strong woman passage,
"Any love that manages to
seep in through the cracks
Is quickly sucked dry of all life
By the venomous narcissism
running through your veins"
"Any love that manages to
seep in through the cracks
Is quickly sucked dry of all life
By the venomous narcissism
running through your veins"
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Re: Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 6:18pm
Anonymous
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Re: Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 6:19pm
Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 1:05am
Surgical strikes
Watching him fall away and you emerging with dignity and power
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Watching him fall away and you emerging with dignity and power
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Re: Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 6:20pm
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28th May 2020 6:21pm
Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 2:18am
Wonderful capture of the strength that comes from seeing through someone's games and realizing who they really are, and knowing you deserve better. Fantastic poem. The last 3 stanzas are my favourite.
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Re: Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 6:23pm
Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 4:54am
Love does die, but sometimes we are meant to be loved because how were raised. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Anymore
28th May 2020 6:26pm
Everyone deserves love, unfortunately some people are incapable of giving it back
Re. Anymore
2nd Jun 2020 9:02am
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2nd Jun 2020 5:02pm
Re. Anymore
2nd Jun 2020 2:53pm
This was the first poem I read when I came to the site. And it is the reason I joined. You are phenomenal.
I love this poem, because it shows your smartass side. Heh heh heh. And I love it. (Reminds me of me.) (But hey, we ain’t Soul Sisters for nothin!!)
What can I say? You’re my abso-fave!! 😘❤️
I love this poem, because it shows your smartass side. Heh heh heh. And I love it. (Reminds me of me.) (But hey, we ain’t Soul Sisters for nothin!!)
What can I say? You’re my abso-fave!! 😘❤️
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Re: Re. Anymore
2nd Jun 2020 5:01pm
This comment made me happy and gave me chills... the universe is just a crazy thing sometimes. No idea how my poem happened to be the first one you read but I sure am glad it brought you here! We both have something to learn from one another. And it sure is nice to make a new friend with someone who appreciates my smart ass side! It’s truly an honor to be your favorite, there are so many good poets around here I admire and are more talented. I’m just here trying to heal my soul, fighting for myself... ❤️
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6th Jun 2020 11:34am
Re. Anymore
2nd Jun 2020 9:25pm
I have always been the fool in love, and have given the whole of my heart in every relationship, until two women took me for the fool that I am and left my heart beating under dark painful bruises. Two serious relationships where I was just a puppet for them to play with, fooling me into believing they felt the same way about me, yet they didn't.
When done with me they threw me aside, like garbage. I honestly believe I should have been born with tits and a slit between my legs.
XXX
When done with me they threw me aside, like garbage. I honestly believe I should have been born with tits and a slit between my legs.
XXX
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Re: Re. Anymore
2nd Jun 2020 10:25pm
Re: Re. Anymore
6th Jun 2020 11:32am
So true! Ugh. Women. 🙄
Loljk (some of them are literally the worst though!)
(But not us!!)
Loljk (some of them are literally the worst though!)
(But not us!!)
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Re: Re. Anymore
6th Jun 2020 11:32am
So true! Ugh. Women. 🙄
Loljk (some of them are literally the worst though!)
(But not us!!)
Loljk (some of them are literally the worst though!)
(But not us!!)
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