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A song in Time
longing to be
besides you
sing you a song
plucked from heart's vine
stars on music chords
eyes open wide
arms and kisses
circle of safeness
hummed within the song
tenderness
misted eyes
songs choked
on melancholic
throats closed
in tears
floating
on rippled ponds
discarded paper
gold circles broken
thrown.
besides you
sing you a song
plucked from heart's vine
stars on music chords
eyes open wide
arms and kisses
circle of safeness
hummed within the song
tenderness
misted eyes
songs choked
on melancholic
throats closed
in tears
floating
on rippled ponds
discarded paper
gold circles broken
thrown.
Published 25th May 2020
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25th May 2020 8:33am
25th May 2020 9:01am
25th May 2020 10:36am
How well love lays within these lines Grace.
Beautiful flow and meter it's rhythm matches it's Gorgeous words!!!
Heartfelt Beauty!!!
Beautiful flow and meter it's rhythm matches it's Gorgeous words!!!
Heartfelt Beauty!!!
25th May 2020 11:18am
It is about a wish to offer comfort to one who is loved and need comfort during certain time. Thank you for reading commenting and putting it on RL, Soul. That poem has big rooms for improvement. 😁
25th May 2020 11:55am
Indeed easily understood!!!
Improvement...if You can, I think it's great already
Improvement...if You can, I think it's great already
25th May 2020 2:21pm
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