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Together we are the universe
You are my sun, I am your moon
Together we are the universe
Of the millions you do not think
and choose me
My hair blows in the wind
And there are goosebumps on my skin
You won't notice and I'm not scared
Let's walk on the beach
We are the strongest together
I am a desert shower and you are my warmth
Your wildest dream and you are mine
I'm like a comet shining in space somewhere
Where you are good for my dreams
Let's change this planet
With our love
Let my victories be called
in your name and mine in yours
I will grow up but not today
I know that love heals
and I'm not afraid to dream
Together we are the universe
Of the millions you do not think
and choose me
My hair blows in the wind
And there are goosebumps on my skin
You won't notice and I'm not scared
Let's walk on the beach
We are the strongest together
I am a desert shower and you are my warmth
Your wildest dream and you are mine
I'm like a comet shining in space somewhere
Where you are good for my dreams
Let's change this planet
With our love
Let my victories be called
in your name and mine in yours
I will grow up but not today
I know that love heals
and I'm not afraid to dream
Published 22nd May 2020
Author's Note
I felt like I needed to write something positive to provide a little balance since my last ones were not. Sorry if it is cliche. Maybe it is more for me than anything else.
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22nd May 2020 5:28pm
Dear K,
I enjoyed the back and forth balance of this piece. I especially appreciated your last stanza. A very uplifting write and very grateful for that today. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed the back and forth balance of this piece. I especially appreciated your last stanza. A very uplifting write and very grateful for that today. Lovely write. H🌷
22nd May 2020 5:31pm
Thanks Honoria, you really made my day if I was able to brighten your day even a little. That makes me feel good and I can use that today also. :)
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27th May 2020 10:44pm
Romantic, a love that is too long sighted into the future to worry about being in a hurry - 'I will grow up but not today' - I believe true love gives a partner time to change and mature.
27th May 2020 10:53pm
25th Sep 2021 00:44am
"I will grow up but not today"
the beauty of these words.
the fulcrum and the seesaw's bond.
the finding of that balance
always grounded
always by love.
positive are your words.
thank you for sharing
the beauty of these words.
the fulcrum and the seesaw's bond.
the finding of that balance
always grounded
always by love.
positive are your words.
thank you for sharing
25th Sep 2021 8:11am
Thank you so much for reaching back into the archive to find this one and giving me your thoughts which are always beautiful little poems to me. :) I am really happy you could feel the positive words and found beauty in them.
