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My Angel

Written by
Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
Published 14th May 2020
Author's Note
A lil Senryu praising my angel
The idea sprung on me last night as I was trying to get a good picture of the moon as it was huge and stunning in the sky.
The sketch is one of the first i did, superimposed it into here because I found out my phone sucks at taking pictures of the moon lol.
The idea sprung on me last night as I was trying to get a good picture of the moon as it was huge and stunning in the sky.
The sketch is one of the first i did, superimposed it into here because I found out my phone sucks at taking pictures of the moon lol.
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Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 9:34am
Awwww :)
Very sweet and loving, Wh1skey, and nice job with the visual presentation!
That was beautiful, man!
Very sweet and loving, Wh1skey, and nice job with the visual presentation!
That was beautiful, man!
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Re: Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 9:36am
:) Thanks Brother :)
I tried getting a pic of a stunning moon last night but my phone camera just couldn't do it so I improvised a lil bit
Always appreciate hearing your input
Thank you for taking the time to stop in and check out my work
I tried getting a pic of a stunning moon last night but my phone camera just couldn't do it so I improvised a lil bit
Always appreciate hearing your input
Thank you for taking the time to stop in and check out my work
Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 9:41am
Re: Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 9:44am
Thank you so much LilDragonFly :)
I am glad you enjoyed it
And thank you so much for taking the time to check out and comment on my work
I am glad you enjoyed it
And thank you so much for taking the time to check out and comment on my work
Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 11:06am
Dear W,
Beautiful ode to your lovely lady. I’m rather glad your phone didn’t capture the picture or I wouldn’t have known you were such a wonderful artist. Awesome. H🌷
Beautiful ode to your lovely lady. I’m rather glad your phone didn’t capture the picture or I wouldn’t have known you were such a wonderful artist. Awesome. H🌷
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Re: Re. My Angel
Thank you so much H :)
I like to sketch, many of them are included as visuals with my poems :)
I am glad you liked it, and if you like to see more of them as well as others from some awesome artists here stop in Deep Underground Gallery group and check it out. I and others post in there regularly :)
Thank you again for your kind words, and for taking the time to stop in
I like to sketch, many of them are included as visuals with my poems :)
I am glad you liked it, and if you like to see more of them as well as others from some awesome artists here stop in Deep Underground Gallery group and check it out. I and others post in there regularly :)
Thank you again for your kind words, and for taking the time to stop in
Re: Re. My Angel
14th May 2020 4:00pm
Re. My Angel
18th May 2020 5:51am
Re. My Angel
18th May 2020 6:06am
Thank you for your kind words Ani
and also for taking the time to stop in and read my work, I am glad you enjoyed this lil spill
and also for taking the time to stop in and read my work, I am glad you enjoyed this lil spill
Re. My Angel
18th May 2020 11:17pm
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19th May 2020 00:42am
Re. My Angel
Anonymous
29th May 2020 5:55am
Almost a senryu. If you dropped the "all" in the first line it would actually be a senryu. (5-7-5 you know) Nice one

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Re: Re. My Angel
29th May 2020 6:24am
NICE Catch :)
May have to try to fix that
Glad you liked it though
Thanks for taking the time to stop by
May have to try to fix that
Glad you liked it though
Thanks for taking the time to stop by