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Artificial Sweetner
He was so full of himself
there wasn't any room for her.
She left.
He wouldn't have even noticed but the
coffee maker disappeared.
there wasn't any room for her.
She left.
He wouldn't have even noticed but the
coffee maker disappeared.
Published 9th May 2020
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9th May 2020 3:31pm
9th May 2020 4:14pm
I know it’s serious, but I laughed! Another great capture of real life. Great piece Nick...
9th May 2020 4:20pm
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9th May 2020 10:40pm
Ha ... Sad but wonderful little tale ... Love the pic ... Bless and love ... How's the coffee?
9th May 2020 11:31pm
Dear N,
I know there is a heavy heart in there but sound wit, mind and action ruled the day. Another putz! I’m sorry for the sadness of a broken relationship and admired how you crafted the response to it. Totally love the accompanying pic. Great write.
H🌷
I know there is a heavy heart in there but sound wit, mind and action ruled the day. Another putz! I’m sorry for the sadness of a broken relationship and admired how you crafted the response to it. Totally love the accompanying pic. Great write.
H🌷
10th May 2020 5:00am
14th May 2020 11:05pm
Cool title, and I like that there's more realization in self worth.
Great work.
Great work.
