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Blocked Toilet
A blocked toilet
My soul is
Full of sewage
That won’t flush
In winter
No one notices
By summer
The stench
Becomes unbearable
Don’t come near
This disease ridden entity
Heed the warning
Caustic
Toxic
Touch it
Be burned
Published 4th May 2020
| Edited 8th Sep 2021
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4th May 2020 12:13pm
Surely there is an acceptable liquid draino you could take to flush that shit out? You're too good a writer to think that way, AP.
Anonymous
4th May 2020 12:31pm
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9th Sep 2021 1:52am
I don't think your soul is anywhere close to this description..... No fucking way....
Even with my extreme bias.... that's just facts!!
Even with my extreme bias.... that's just facts!!
