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Exotic Rain
When you will cherish
Poetic rain
Probably
First of it's kind
All of a sudden
The Heart
The Mind
And the Soul
Will align
And things will never be
The same
With memories
So afresh
Resonating a free soul
You will remember
How it feels
While being
Drenched in the rain
A lot more
There
You hold to say
Besides, grant me
Today
And every tomorrow
Poetic rain
Probably
First of it's kind
All of a sudden
The Heart
The Mind
And the Soul
Will align
And things will never be
The same
With memories
So afresh
Resonating a free soul
You will remember
How it feels
While being
Drenched in the rain
A lot more
There
You hold to say
Besides, grant me
Today
And every tomorrow
Published 1st May 2020
| Edited 5th May 2020
Author's Note
What remains
Background concept image from https://ksisradio.com/rain-forces-cancellation-at-lucas-oil-speedway/
Background concept image from https://ksisradio.com/rain-forces-cancellation-at-lucas-oil-speedway/
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1st May 2020 5:35am
There is so much magic in rain. I also think there is a lot of magic in this piece even more than meets the eye. That’s what makes it intriguing.
4th May 2020 2:50am
1st May 2020 10:02am
4th May 2020 2:49am
1st May 2020 1:42pm
Very inspiring and uplifting words to describe the feeling of understanding the tranquility of the rain..nicely composed dear poetess..respect
4th May 2020 2:48am
4th May 2020 10:47am
Thank you for the compliment much appreciated you remain safe as well dear poetess..respect
2nd May 2020 00:14am
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4th May 2020 2:46am
In the Covid Time, I think the warm appreciation one can return back is, stay safe.
Warm Regards
Mahesh
Warm Regards
Mahesh
