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The corona catastrophe
Silently shrill
a silent chill
seems to have run down the spine
of our blue planet windmill
So many deceased
Too many ill
mounting and surmounting
the healthcare bill
Breathing for many
is like climbing uphill
or like panting on
your home treadmill
And it's frightening when
there is nil a pill.
A minute invisible
virus doth kill .
Pray to God for mercy
bow and kneel!
Many are dying
without a will
It's safer to stay home
by the window sill
The world seems to have come
to a standstill
You now have time to sharpen
your poetic quill
In lockdown pray
and ink still spill
You may hone
your poetic skill
Until the virus
has had its fill.
Corona they say feels like drowning
like a fish without a gill
for we can't breathe
like the eel or krill.
In mouths hot water
flush and swill
Exterminate this virus?
only God can and will.
a silent chill
seems to have run down the spine
of our blue planet windmill
So many deceased
Too many ill
mounting and surmounting
the healthcare bill
Breathing for many
is like climbing uphill
or like panting on
your home treadmill
And it's frightening when
there is nil a pill.
A minute invisible
virus doth kill .
Pray to God for mercy
bow and kneel!
Many are dying
without a will
It's safer to stay home
by the window sill
The world seems to have come
to a standstill
You now have time to sharpen
your poetic quill
In lockdown pray
and ink still spill
You may hone
your poetic skill
Until the virus
has had its fill.
Corona they say feels like drowning
like a fish without a gill
for we can't breathe
like the eel or krill.
In mouths hot water
flush and swill
Exterminate this virus?
only God can and will.
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Re. The corona catastrophe
30th Apr 2020 10:19am
"blue planet windmill" ... poetic gold ... so vivid this is ... captures so much of what I am feeling ... stay safe dear poet ...
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30th Apr 2020 2:17pm
My warmest thanks for your bright golden comment. Do stay safe, take care lil dragonfly, by the way I adore dragonflies so much.
Re. The corona catastrophe
30th Apr 2020 12:34pm
Yes you sum it up just right heart touching truth spoken indeed nicely composed respect
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Re: Re. The corona catastrophe
Heyy, thanks soo much for nice touching comment. Do stay safe, respect back at you regards.
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30th Apr 2020 11:46pm
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30th Apr 2020 3:25pm
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30th Apr 2020 3:58pm
Um yeah how I grasp the virus scenarios from around the world , from the news and reports. I'm fine up to now, Tanzania has been lucky to have had only 3 or 4 deaths but I feel for the other parts of the world badly affected. Stay safe, be well,. ! Take care.
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30th Apr 2020 3:50pm
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30th Apr 2020 3:59pm
Yeah God can and will help , for he's more powerful than the virus brought about by human sin and failings perhaps. Warm thanks and take care, stay safe!
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30th Apr 2020 5:52pm
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30th Apr 2020 6:51pm
Warm thanks for the feedback! Stay safe, stay well dear poetess. I would like to read yours too.
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30th Apr 2020 6:55pm
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Re. The corona catastrophe
30th Apr 2020 10:26pm
You put into vivid words this tragedy of our time. Though it is about an awful catastrophe. your poetic talent shows its ability to create in the midst of such an apocalypse. Your description of having the virus as like drowning was perfect in its desperation. Most writers I've read seem to steer clear of the subject. But you wrote it with that gift you have to awaken us.
John
John
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Re: Re. The corona catastrophe
1st May 2020 10:36am
Hi John, thanks soo much for a nice super comment, your feedback is great! You know my sister lives in Louisiana Baton Rouge too. Stay safe, best wishes and regards.
Re. The corona catastrophe
Anonymous
1st May 2020 5:05am
Your words is the true state of the world today. The bright thing is as you say, we all have time to hone in on our talent, it has brought us all to evaluate our own spirituality. Enjoyed this piece, continue to write more. Blessings.
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Re: Re. The corona catastrophe
1st May 2020 10:37am
Yeah man spirituality and turning to God is vital in these times or we feel too hopeless and panicky scared. Warmest thanks for your lovely bright comment. Take care and best wishes.
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Anonymous
2nd May 2020 9:57pm
You are welcome my friend, stay hopeful & keep GOD's peace within.
Blessings
Blessings
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Re. The corona catastrophe
1st May 2020 5:27am
Great poem. I hope god decides to destroy the virus soon. Keep on writing.
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1st May 2020 10:40am
Thanks so much poet, yes I pray and hope so too as He can take us out of this punishment being dealt on us probably due to human sin and wrongful ways such that nature naturally decides to punish us . But God can overturn and control nature and withdraw its punishment.
Stay safe and best wishes.
I will pop in to see what you wrote for us to read soon.
Stay safe and best wishes.
I will pop in to see what you wrote for us to read soon.
Re. The corona catastrophe
3rd May 2020 4:17am
Really great rhyming summation of events and human condition, a true test of faith as your ending highlighted, great poem..
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3rd May 2020 4:07pm
Warm thanks for your thoughts on this, I like how you phrased it as human condition, a test of faith, to some it draws closer and tighter to faith and God though. Take care and stay safe!
Re. The corona catastrophe
8th May 2020 5:53pm
We can only hope there is a vaccine for these viruses soon, Zaynab_kamoonpury. Many here share your sentiments. Thank goodness DU had NaPo! Brought many a poet home and inaugurated even more!
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27th Jun 2020 6:10pm
Warm thanks for your thoughts on this poem and situation. Yeahh NAPO would help pass the time I guess. Take care, stay safe.
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28th Jun 2020 9:39pm
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Re. The corona catastrophe
23rd Nov 2021 2:59am
A well-written poem indeed. COVID is still causing deaths all over the place: Europe is back in lock-down. As you said, only God has the answer. I hope he (or She) transmits it soon....
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