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Sleeplessness II
Author's Note
Written the same night I wrote the original 'Sleeplessness'
Just now posting and making a visual to accompany :)
Just now posting and making a visual to accompany :)
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Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 1:45am
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30th Apr 2020 1:47am
Thank you very much, Jen. You are always so sweet and supportive <3
I think I'm starting to get the hang of the visuals now! Heh.
I think I'm starting to get the hang of the visuals now! Heh.
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 2:07am
I use to be able to stay up late to convey my write. But I feel an unusual darkness that doesn’t want me to write
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30th Apr 2020 2:14am
Shakespearan-Sweet,
Hmm... you are having a writer's block or something? An unusual darkness. Perhaps depression? Hopefully you will find your will to write one way or another.
Anyway, thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment - it means a lot to me :)
Hmm... you are having a writer's block or something? An unusual darkness. Perhaps depression? Hopefully you will find your will to write one way or another.
Anyway, thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment - it means a lot to me :)
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 2:07am
It feels like new and fresh.
I love the picture and merged with the piece.
It won me over.
Now i want to have inspirations staying awake like that picture.
I love the picture and merged with the piece.
It won me over.
Now i want to have inspirations staying awake like that picture.
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30th Apr 2020 2:32am
I am thrilled that you liked it so much, Poetic_Strength! I am very flattered by the RL too - it means a lot :)
It's not always like that for me, heh. Sometimes I can't think at all running on low sleep... but sometimes it brings about a certain creative spark that I can't find anywhere else.
Glad I could "win you over" :D
It's not always like that for me, heh. Sometimes I can't think at all running on low sleep... but sometimes it brings about a certain creative spark that I can't find anywhere else.
Glad I could "win you over" :D
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 2:09am
Love the graphics NB
The poem as well... I can relate to this most of the time.
The poem as well... I can relate to this most of the time.
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30th Apr 2020 4:35am
Heyyy buddydog,
Thanks for stopping by again to read and comment! Your kind compliments are most appreciated... and I am happy that you were able to relate :)
A little bit different feeling than the first version, but there are similarities!
Thanks for stopping by again to read and comment! Your kind compliments are most appreciated... and I am happy that you were able to relate :)
A little bit different feeling than the first version, but there are similarities!
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 2:38am
Dear NB,
Bravo! You’ve totally got the hang of this. It’s a beautiful picture and poem. “The walls...” is a fantastic closing. I think the visual painted with this is so expressive when we can finally let go and let our true selves just be. It’s an exhilarating and liberating feeling. Love it. Wonderful write.
H🌷
Bravo! You’ve totally got the hang of this. It’s a beautiful picture and poem. “The walls...” is a fantastic closing. I think the visual painted with this is so expressive when we can finally let go and let our true selves just be. It’s an exhilarating and liberating feeling. Love it. Wonderful write.
H🌷
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Awww, thanks, H!
You are always sweet and encouraging... you always make me warm on the inside :)
Your words mean a lot to me, so thanks for leaving them here...
I'm really happy that you liked it so much...!
You are always sweet and encouraging... you always make me warm on the inside :)
Your words mean a lot to me, so thanks for leaving them here...
I'm really happy that you liked it so much...!
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I'm a sleepless girl too, and the muse used to come in those sweet hours. She still does, but we accomplish nothing.:/
This is a beauty; the graphic and sentiments. I love visuals the most too. I'm glad you discovered that love and may your sleepless nights be eternal and shared with the muse and your soul to be in that sacred state of harmony....
This is a beauty; the graphic and sentiments. I love visuals the most too. I'm glad you discovered that love and may your sleepless nights be eternal and shared with the muse and your soul to be in that sacred state of harmony....
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30th Apr 2020 12:28pm
Aww... thanks for your wonderful comment and your good wishes, Pandy :)
I am glad that you can relate, but I'm sorry you are having trouble finding productivity in your writings... sometimes for me, lack of sleep just makes me a zombie... others I am more creative and energetic. I usually overthink everything... something about that sleeplessness shuts off that overthinking process in me and just lets things flow! But it only works half the time, heh!
Anyway, thanks again for stopping by... I very much appreciate you!! :)
I am glad that you can relate, but I'm sorry you are having trouble finding productivity in your writings... sometimes for me, lack of sleep just makes me a zombie... others I am more creative and energetic. I usually overthink everything... something about that sleeplessness shuts off that overthinking process in me and just lets things flow! But it only works half the time, heh!
Anyway, thanks again for stopping by... I very much appreciate you!! :)
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30th Apr 2020 3:15am
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30th Apr 2020 9:44pm
Thanks so much, Steven!! I'm so glad that you liked it! Your kind words are most appreciated... as well as your readership and support :)
Best wishes, and take care!
-NewB
Best wishes, and take care!
-NewB
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 3:52am
dearest NewB I really love this
beautiful graphics and I can totally relate to the message
I love that feeling ❤
beautiful graphics and I can totally relate to the message
I love that feeling ❤
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Thank you, Brenda :)
You are very sweet, and I am grateful that appreciate my work... as well as finding it personally relatable! :)
Your encouragement means a lot to me...truly <3
You are very sweet, and I am grateful that appreciate my work... as well as finding it personally relatable! :)
Your encouragement means a lot to me...truly <3
Re. Sleeplessness II
Your eyes may be weary but your mind is invigorated with incredible awareness, compelling you to ink spectacular poetry. You know you are good when you can do this with your eyes closed... Brilliant Brother!!!
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Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 5:14am
Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 6:12am
Such an inspiring piece very relatable and that’s the time some of your best masterpieces can come out whether it be from pen to paper or painting a beautiful masterpiece. I love it :)
Joanna
Joanna
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30th Apr 2020 10:06am
Beautiful visual to go along with an equally beautiful poem NewB. There's something magical about a night that makes us sleepless where our thoughts wander freely where inspiration come to visit us allowing us to freely express our innermost thoughts. It must be the silence and peace that make this free flowing of thoughts possible because our senses are tune in and more focus. Lovely spill. 🌹🙏
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30th Apr 2020 4:21pm
........on the borderline of psychosis......
am very familiar with this state of mind(less) only it takes me 72 or more hrs to reach that state
Wonderful spill with lots of food for thought and pleasing on the eyes
am very familiar with this state of mind(less) only it takes me 72 or more hrs to reach that state
Wonderful spill with lots of food for thought and pleasing on the eyes
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Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 7:58pm
Nicely written ode to the magic of the night, NewB, where the dust of dreams become stars . Keep up the good work !
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Re. Sleeplessness II
30th Apr 2020 11:46pm
Just a magical piece of poetry NB...I too find a little sleep deprivation an inspiring experience...mind you, I like a little Jack and hardwater as well lol.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re. Sleeplessness II
1st May 2020 1:00pm
Killer poem. I understand that feeling as if the creativity has a mind of it's own.
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1st May 2020 9:14pm
Great. I like to go to bed late, and I use the time for creative writing, music, or languages.
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