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Desolation
I feel the soil crumble under my feet
Abandoning the ligature of reason
Across the fertile fields
To the edge of a timeless Forest
Swaying in the perfumed scent of summer
In these neural waves of conscience
Clouded thoughts begin to weep
On coffee grains of dirt
Swirling on the cool breeze
In times of desolation
Abandoning the ligature of reason
Across the fertile fields
To the edge of a timeless Forest
Swaying in the perfumed scent of summer
In these neural waves of conscience
Clouded thoughts begin to weep
On coffee grains of dirt
Swirling on the cool breeze
In times of desolation
Published 28th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Walking in the fields...listening to Pearl Jam...
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28th Apr 2020 9:12pm
I feel the earth move under my feet
I feel the sky tumbling down
I feel my heart start to trembling
Whenever you're around
Carole king - my grandad's favourite
Masterful verses
I feel the sky tumbling down
I feel my heart start to trembling
Whenever you're around
Carole king - my grandad's favourite
Masterful verses
28th Apr 2020 11:02pm
Thanks for the visit...I haven't spoken to anybody in a week.
This lockdown has given me some time to reflect on life. Not sure if that's a good thing, because I think too much.
This lockdown has given me some time to reflect on life. Not sure if that's a good thing, because I think too much.
28th Apr 2020 11:15pm
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29th Apr 2020 10:11am
Thanks so much. There is a song by eddie called Release, which inspired me as I strolled across the fields.
29th Apr 2020 6:52am
"Clouded thoughts begin to weep" is my favorite line. Good description of desolation.
29th Apr 2020 10:14am
Thanks for your comments. Desolation is how I felt as the clouds threatened to rain. It was a very eerie walk.
29th Apr 2020 10:12am
29th Apr 2020 5:29pm
11th Jul 2020 4:56am
Excellent verse. It's interesting that getting in touch with nature really inspires us.
"To the edge of a timeless Forest", if those trees could talk to us and tell us ancient secrets.
Beautiful work.
"To the edge of a timeless Forest", if those trees could talk to us and tell us ancient secrets.
Beautiful work.
