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Lesson number 1
When days were dark and nights were long
An idea had sparked into a thought
Will I find happiness or is hope long gone
I think what happened was I've been all wrong
Hope has been there in the winds' songs
A lesson within was let bygones be bygones
An idea had sparked into a thought
Will I find happiness or is hope long gone
I think what happened was I've been all wrong
Hope has been there in the winds' songs
A lesson within was let bygones be bygones
Published 23rd Apr 2020
| Edited 24th Apr 2020
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23rd Apr 2020 3:51pm
23rd Apr 2020 4:04pm
23rd Apr 2020 4:57pm
This is an extraordinary example of resiliency, Whitefeather.
Being half Shoshone, I understood with clarity the, " winds' song ". You have been listening, dear poet. As with the wind, all things change and move in the direction as nature has intended it to be so.
One must learn from the past, be it good or bad, to remind us that we have always had "hope", when we listen for her.
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Being half Shoshone, I understood with clarity the, " winds' song ". You have been listening, dear poet. As with the wind, all things change and move in the direction as nature has intended it to be so.
One must learn from the past, be it good or bad, to remind us that we have always had "hope", when we listen for her.
🌻✌
23rd Apr 2020 7:32pm
Hoka! Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it. I seem to write effortlessly. Off the top of my head haha.
23rd Apr 2020 8:09pm
Yes, we should let bygones be bygones but sometimes your anger get the best you and you have to give that person a piece of your mind. Keep on writing.
24th Apr 2020 2:14pm
I read a few of work you have a subconscious mind as you write with a flow of compassion in your words of wisdom and knowledge of the changes in life and love..respect brother poet
24th Apr 2020 3:45pm
And your intuition is spot on. I'm always in my head. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
24th Apr 2020 4:30pm
29th Apr 2020 5:00pm
Very nice piece! Good style and flow.
one of the more difficult things to do in life is to let some things go,
letting bygones be bygones can be a very hard line to tow!
one of the more difficult things to do in life is to let some things go,
letting bygones be bygones can be a very hard line to tow!
9th Jul 2021 9:53am
