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Whisper
The whisper came in
Saying that house and garden
Between wake and dream
Saying that house and garden
Between wake and dream
Author's Note
That night...very early morning...the voice... I am not sure whose...
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Re. Whisper
23rd Apr 2020 5:26am
House & garden is all you need...well... apart from food, water, money & love (if you're lucky).
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Re: Re. Whisper
23rd Apr 2020 6:22am
They all that I need, but the garden comes out as an irreplaceable role in my life. I love love love flowers.
Re. Whisper
23rd Apr 2020 11:14am
Beautiful dear Jasmine
Flowers are an essential part of natural beauty. There is a saying, "Stop, and smell the flowers".
It means, going through the rush of life, slow down and enjoy the simple things, ie: it's free to stop and enjoy things nature brings.
Peace my dear.
Elizabeth🌻🌹🌷🌸💐
Flowers are an essential part of natural beauty. There is a saying, "Stop, and smell the flowers".
It means, going through the rush of life, slow down and enjoy the simple things, ie: it's free to stop and enjoy things nature brings.
Peace my dear.
Elizabeth🌻🌹🌷🌸💐
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Re: Re. Whisper
Dear Lagertha,
I am happy to know you who know the nature so well, and also enjoy the stories you have told me about your family and people. They are all fascinating to me.
Thank you for the commenting and RL addition.
Love
Jasmine
I am happy to know you who know the nature so well, and also enjoy the stories you have told me about your family and people. They are all fascinating to me.
Thank you for the commenting and RL addition.
Love
Jasmine
Re. Whisper
23rd Apr 2020 6:41pm
It has the economy and zen quality of a haiku. Something to consider, the subtle nuances moving beneath the surface description.
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Re: Re. Whisper
24th Apr 2020 4:12am
Something mystical and unknown in this world is widely accepted by Buddhism or Taoism. I was a Buddist but has converted to a Christian for many years.
I am not sure what was happening but it just happened...
Dear Daniel, thank you so much for sharing your thought.
Love
Jasmine
I am not sure what was happening but it just happened...
Dear Daniel, thank you so much for sharing your thought.
Love
Jasmine
Re: Re. Whisper
26th Apr 2020 2:15pm
Thank you, my dear friend. The only word "Beautiful" in your comment is saying many things to me. I appreciate the RL entry.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Re. Whisper
14th May 2020 1:25am
i really like soft writings like this, it is wonderful. Between wake and dream, what i nice thought.
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Re: Re. Whisper
Thank you so much for sharing your thought.
Welcome to join us.
Love
Jasmine
Welcome to join us.
Love
Jasmine