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Free Your Mind

I will walk until my knees are weakened
you call me on the phone and say your mind is shakin'
I will talk with you until my lungs stop breathin'
and 'til the sun's no longer shinin'

you say you've been dropped into a dark place
and your heart and mind, who will win the race?
with a dream you've been tryin' to chase
you wonder, has it all gone to waste?

you know the child within you still lives
something inside's been reignited
but over the years you've learned to hide it
and fight it

Suddenly you hear the words and it's all coming clear
and the sign you've been searching for is ever so near
so keep walkin' 'til your knees are weakened, my dear
and tell your story 'til your lungs are no longer breathin' air.
Written by DreamerSeeker
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Please be honest and don't be afraid to say this sucks. I want to be a better poet/lyricist, so please give me your honesty and some advice on how I can improve.
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