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Hush
Your voice is the hush of evening
Gentle, quiet in the drawing down
The soft stillness of daylight's fleeting
Where lengthened shadows found
Please don't speak to me of leaving
Speak to me without a sound
Just the nearness of your breathing
Just your eyes where my heart's drowned
Just our lips so softly meeting
Fiercely lingering in kisses found
The all of you my life's been needing
And by you forever bound
Gentle, quiet in the drawing down
The soft stillness of daylight's fleeting
Where lengthened shadows found
Please don't speak to me of leaving
Speak to me without a sound
Just the nearness of your breathing
Just your eyes where my heart's drowned
Just our lips so softly meeting
Fiercely lingering in kisses found
The all of you my life's been needing
And by you forever bound
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Re. Hush
5th Apr 2020 4:55am
Love the language, "fiercely lingering in kisses found." Enjoyed reading this poem!
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5th Apr 2020 5:10am
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5th Apr 2020 4:58am
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5th Apr 2020 5:14am
I find women to be seductive by their very nature. And who doesn't enjoy being seduced?
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5th Apr 2020 10:08am
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5th Apr 2020 1:48pm
Words are what we make of them. Sweet seduction isn't such a bad way to be lost in a moment, is it?
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5th Apr 2020 3:43pm
There is no greater feeling than falling in love; except capturing it in a poem.
Well done, Joe.
Well done, Joe.
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Re. Hush
6th Apr 2020 5:26am
Dear AJ,
The gentleness of a touch won’t need words will it? This piece is like a soft blanket to entice and wrap the soul. This sultry imagery is wonderfully written here and has an elegance all its own. H🌷
The gentleness of a touch won’t need words will it? This piece is like a soft blanket to entice and wrap the soul. This sultry imagery is wonderfully written here and has an elegance all its own. H🌷
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6th Apr 2020 9:37pm
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9th Apr 2020 2:51am
Makes you want to hang on to that moment forever... just perfect, Joe!
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9th Apr 2020 9:52pm
Forever is captured in moments as these. Everything changes, because love changes everything.
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10th Apr 2020 1:56am