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A little darkness
a little darkness holds me down
Some kind of entity ,,,,?
Burning out inside of me,,,,
Losing all of me I see,,,,
A relentless gentle grip
The Amber glass about to tip.
It loves to numb my bones
Now I’m told to stay alone .
These walls are fucking hard enough.
I don’t wanna give it up .
I would rather fuck it up .
And Eventually throw it up...
But It’s hard to keep my breath without you breathing falsely into me .
Will I ever change for the better?
Will I ever remember me.
(Fuck it )
I searched inside of me .
more than I’ll ever need,,,
More than I have in me....
More than I’ll ever care to see.
Some kind of entity ,,,,?
Burning out inside of me,,,,
Losing all of me I see,,,,
A relentless gentle grip
The Amber glass about to tip.
It loves to numb my bones
Now I’m told to stay alone .
These walls are fucking hard enough.
I don’t wanna give it up .
I would rather fuck it up .
And Eventually throw it up...
But It’s hard to keep my breath without you breathing falsely into me .
Will I ever change for the better?
Will I ever remember me.
(Fuck it )
I searched inside of me .
more than I’ll ever need,,,
More than I have in me....
More than I’ll ever care to see.
Published 5th Apr 2020
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5th Apr 2020 4:03am
5th Apr 2020 4:35am
6th Apr 2020 11:42pm
Powerful, dark, emotional... Damn, jigg. Best wishes to you... And I hope you're okay. Thanks for sharing that vulnerable write with us...
13th Apr 2020 4:31am
dark but deep hope you get out of the dark place this is a great piece none the less wonderful job
We all have our antidotes for pain both mentally and physically. It's a difficult balance to keep let alone find. Some find it with sex some with liquor some with drugs or a cocktail of little bits from each destruction we indulge in.
The more awareness and knowledge of something that is intent on destruction of you is worth the effort. Knowledge is power after all. Protect any peace you seek, but don't fear the walk with your demons. If you never go behind enemy lines you won't ever truly understand the dark aspects of yourself.
I'm here with love 🖤jaded
The more awareness and knowledge of something that is intent on destruction of you is worth the effort. Knowledge is power after all. Protect any peace you seek, but don't fear the walk with your demons. If you never go behind enemy lines you won't ever truly understand the dark aspects of yourself.
I'm here with love 🖤jaded
Anonymous
14th May 2020 8:13pm
You paint my life with your words, .. oh fuck me, .. they hit home jigg82
6th Aug 2020 1:18am
I love that you tie your words to the state of the world today. You are definitely in good company: dealing with things has been the subject of so many great songs.
2nd Dec 2020 7:52pm
it has the lunacy of anger that has been burning for a long time... yes, it attracts darkness and entities... better to be cleansed :) easier said than done though
22nd Dec 2020 10:10pm
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12th Feb 2023 10:57am
"But It’s hard to keep my breath without you breathing falsely into me", I felt out of breath reading this line. Legit ass poetry.
LJ
LJ
23rd Mar 2024 6:17pm
oh the irony of just putting "boredom" as the only category.
it makes the piece have an stronger "throw life away because why not? life sucks" vibe
nice work
it makes the piece have an stronger "throw life away because why not? life sucks" vibe
nice work
