Migraine

Hey, Jigg!

I hope you are open to a coupla suggestions, seeing as how you requested Honest Critique.

Firstly, I enjoy the simplicity of this. It's direct. It's honest.

Secondly, I don't wish such on anyone and I hope you aren't suffering many or any for that matter.

Thirdly, okay. Title suggestion:

"Going Against Migraine"

Then change the 2nd line to

"Please work with me"

I love the feedback,but to be honest I was in so much pain when I wrote this,I could only get a few words in,my vision was thunder clapped and questionable at best lol
But I promise you that I meant every word brother.
I wrote this short poem under serious head pain , all I could think of was please make it stop.

Well, I commend you for writing anything - most people just crumple up into a ball and beg for death.

The flavor of Death crossed my mind a few times during that chapter and I imagined death had a taste of black licorice,not my favorite candy but totally edible lol fuck!🤘

Fuuuuck I hate migraines almost nothing you can do Vicks vaporub helps I'm sorry

I am sorry you where in a lot of pain. I hope things lighten up for you. 🖤

Ouch! You really captured the pain in this little write... I hope your pain lessens, jigg!

I totally fill your pain. I have been fighting this same migraine for 16months. I was just diagnosed with Epilepsy which is one of my symptoms. I pray that you found relief.

That last one really hurt bad,migraines are just pure evil.

Migraine symptoms would be an interesting Poetry competition. 😬

No doubt 😂🤘

I wrote a poem for NaPo this year that, in the best way I could, describes some of things I experienced during the course of one. I will never again write anything in the midst of one. It was pure hell, but I was NOT missing a day. Lol Sorry to hear you experience them. They are the devil.

Thank goodness I haven’t had one since I wrote that. misery at it’s finest 😬

These crazy fuckers need to stop. I had one today out of no where. Took me down. Im ok now but now the side effects of the triptans are starting. Viscous cycle. I cant wait for this one to end. May you find peace and relief. <3

Dreadful migraine go away!😤

Dirty bastards.

Simple. I hate headaches. It's hard to shut yourself up sometimes.

I know the pain....I get them way to often. They really do suck! :)

Sending you healing thoughts ...

I think it hits the mark in so many ways.
Truthfully,  you could change the title to any number of things and it would still apply.