Migraine

Hey, Jigg!

I hope you are open to a coupla suggestions, seeing as how you requested Honest Critique.

Firstly, I enjoy the simplicity of this. It's direct. It's honest.

Secondly, I don't wish such on anyone and I hope you aren't suffering many or any for that matter.

Thirdly, okay. Title suggestion:

"Going Against Migraine"

Then change the 2nd line to

"Please work with me"

I love the feedback,but to be honest I was in so much pain when I wrote this,I could only get a few words in,my vision was thunder clapped and questionable at best lol
But I promise you that I meant every word brother.
I wrote this short poem under serious head pain , all I could think of was please make it stop.

Well, I commend you for writing anything - most people just crumple up into a ball and beg for death.

The flavor of Death crossed my mind a few times during that chapter and I imagined death had a taste of black licorice,not my favorite candy but totally edible lol fuck!🤘

Fuuuuck I hate migraines almost nothing you can do Vicks vaporub helps I'm sorry

I am sorry you where in a lot of pain. I hope things lighten up for you. 🖤

Ouch! You really captured the pain in this little write... I hope your pain lessens, jigg!

I totally fill your pain. I have been fighting this same migraine for 16months. I was just diagnosed with Epilepsy which is one of my symptoms. I pray that you found relief.

That last one really hurt bad,migraines are just pure evil.

Migraine symptoms would be an interesting Poetry competition. 😬

No doubt 😂🤘

I wrote a poem for NaPo this year that, in the best way I could, describes some of things I experienced during the course of one. I will never again write anything in the midst of one. It was pure hell, but I was NOT missing a day. Lol Sorry to hear you experience them. They are the devil.

Thank goodness I haven’t had one since I wrote that. misery at it’s finest 😬

These crazy fuckers need to stop. I had one today out of no where. Took me down. Im ok now but now the side effects of the triptans are starting. Viscous cycle. I cant wait for this one to end. May you find peace and relief. <3

Dreadful migraine go away!😤

Dirty bastards.

Simple. I hate headaches. It's hard to shut yourself up sometimes.

I know the pain....I get them way to often. They really do suck! :)

Sending you healing thoughts ...

I think it hits the mark in so many ways.
Truthfully,  you could change the title to any number of things and it would still apply.

Have you tried cayenne pepper? Just a suggestion

Thankfully I haven’t had one since this poem.so cayenne pepper?…

It is the fastest all natural headache remedy.  Just sprinkle some in water or whatever your drinking. Might not be good if your problem is caused by stress then idk