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Companion
I can hear her in the rain
A lullaby, a sweet refrain
A lover from the distant past
A lover never born to last
She is here to comfort me
Bring some solace, set me free
She believes that I was born to live
Bestow what I have to give
I accept my coming life
Be it dark, replete with strife
Her warm whisper in my ear
Tells me that I have naught to fear
Her presence will never fade
But protect me in the evening shade
Hold my hand all through the night
A companion in the morning light.
A lullaby, a sweet refrain
A lover from the distant past
A lover never born to last
She is here to comfort me
Bring some solace, set me free
She believes that I was born to live
Bestow what I have to give
I accept my coming life
Be it dark, replete with strife
Her warm whisper in my ear
Tells me that I have naught to fear
Her presence will never fade
But protect me in the evening shade
Hold my hand all through the night
A companion in the morning light.
Published 4th Apr 2020
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4th Apr 2020 7:47pm
4th Apr 2020 7:47pm
4th Apr 2020 7:55pm
Thanks for the kind comment and RL entry, calamltygin. I'm glad you saw some beauty. Ghost tales need not be chilling.
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5th Apr 2020 10:13am
5th Apr 2020 9:46pm
Crowfly....
A "hauntingly" lovely piece! There.s just that certain something, about this scribe, that draws me in...invites me to read it multiple times! And....when i have finished each subsequent read, my mind's eye so clearly pictures that ethereal scene...the effervescence of a wavering form...the essence of her presence bringing comfort in the darkness...and fading as the rain dissipates with the morning light...
You have the ability--always-- to create such intriguing stories with your poetry...while making rhyming seem so effortless! Truly enjoyed!!!
Take care Mo Chara Daor! May You remain well!
Sioch`ain leat.
Enchantress
A "hauntingly" lovely piece! There.s just that certain something, about this scribe, that draws me in...invites me to read it multiple times! And....when i have finished each subsequent read, my mind's eye so clearly pictures that ethereal scene...the effervescence of a wavering form...the essence of her presence bringing comfort in the darkness...and fading as the rain dissipates with the morning light...
You have the ability--always-- to create such intriguing stories with your poetry...while making rhyming seem so effortless! Truly enjoyed!!!
Take care Mo Chara Daor! May You remain well!
Sioch`ain leat.
Enchantress
5th Apr 2020 9:49pm
21st Apr 2020 00:24am
Every time I re-read this it feels more like you're haunted, the human-pet of your muse, watching over you.
Also it reads out loud with a steady sonorous rhythm that reminds me of a dark version of The rain the park and other things
https://youtu.be/uC9tALmALh0
Also it reads out loud with a steady sonorous rhythm that reminds me of a dark version of The rain the park and other things
https://youtu.be/uC9tALmALh0
