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THE ETERNAL SUNSHINE OF THE SLY OLD EYE
my admiration is a secret
whispered only
to the page
a quiet infatuation
designed by the gods
as unrequited
and either a joke or offensive
and so unspoken
except in this old man's mind
but then an old man is just a young man
tempered and chastened by circumstance
and his eye is only a little cloudy
#hashtag #CarolAnnDuffy
whispered only
to the page
a quiet infatuation
designed by the gods
as unrequited
and either a joke or offensive
and so unspoken
except in this old man's mind
but then an old man is just a young man
tempered and chastened by circumstance
and his eye is only a little cloudy
#hashtag #CarolAnnDuffy
Published 28th Mar 2020
Author's Note
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/warming-her-pearls/
Old men confined to their beds grabbing at their nurse's young curves.
Me watching a young woman cross floor and thinking she doesn't know how gorgeous she is.
Or maybe she does.
Carol Ann Duffy's poem of unrequited desire.
Old men confined to their beds grabbing at their nurse's young curves.
Me watching a young woman cross floor and thinking she doesn't know how gorgeous she is.
Or maybe she does.
Carol Ann Duffy's poem of unrequited desire.
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Anonymous
28th Mar 2020 4:06pm
I like this poem a lot because of its subtle, alternative message : there is more than meets the eye.
And because of that, the poem becomes a doorway into a deeper examination of the non-physical soul or mind in tandem with a physical representation.
Good luck in the judging!
And because of that, the poem becomes a doorway into a deeper examination of the non-physical soul or mind in tandem with a physical representation.
Good luck in the judging!
28th Mar 2020 4:43pm
Thanks, Johnny.
I don't expect a lot from the judging, but it was inspired by Duffy's great poetry. I wrote it a couple weeks ago but was hesitant to post it, then the more I worked on it the more I was inclined to share.
There is always more than meets the eye.
Thanks for reading.
Your comments are always appreciated.
J.
I don't expect a lot from the judging, but it was inspired by Duffy's great poetry. I wrote it a couple weeks ago but was hesitant to post it, then the more I worked on it the more I was inclined to share.
There is always more than meets the eye.
Thanks for reading.
Your comments are always appreciated.
J.
28th Mar 2020 9:22pm
Dear J,
This piece made my heart skip a beat. It is so thoughtful and reflective to me as a remembrance that we are all young in mind and soul and feelings and attractions don’t always match a chronological number. The heart loves what the heart loves. It’s a wonderful poem. H🌷
This piece made my heart skip a beat. It is so thoughtful and reflective to me as a remembrance that we are all young in mind and soul and feelings and attractions don’t always match a chronological number. The heart loves what the heart loves. It’s a wonderful poem. H🌷
29th Mar 2020 12:46pm
Thank you, .
I am so happy you enjoyed this poem.
And you are right -- the heart loves what it loves.
Thanks again.
J.
I am so happy you enjoyed this poem.
And you are right -- the heart loves what it loves.
Thanks again.
J.
