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Noctems endless dance
Manipulate thoughts
influence the soul
dancing through hair-raising nights
endless conversations
with shadow shapes
Red wine.
Visible path to impossibilities,
shows threatening intangibles
far beyond human reasoning
broken bottle on the floor
Risk of falling without an anchor
shadow shape,
let go who I have been
Lost my sanity
Found
shocking
Clawed that unrecognizable surface,
depth not transparent
never been.
Blood visible across the floor.
Night walk
Utterly horrible ending
of conversations at night.
influence the soul
dancing through hair-raising nights
endless conversations
with shadow shapes
Red wine.
Visible path to impossibilities,
shows threatening intangibles
far beyond human reasoning
broken bottle on the floor
Risk of falling without an anchor
shadow shape,
let go who I have been
Lost my sanity
Found
shocking
Clawed that unrecognizable surface,
depth not transparent
never been.
Blood visible across the floor.
Night walk
Utterly horrible ending
of conversations at night.
Published 23rd Mar 2020
| Edited 8th Jun 2020
Author's Note
I haven't found a title for this one yet, so if you would like to help, I would be greatful.
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Mar 2020 2:14pm
23rd Mar 2020 1:52pm
Very beautifully written. Only some immediate thoughts but maybe Dancing with Shadows or Penumbra based on the primary scientific meaning, which is "a space of partial illumination (as in an eclipse) between the perfect shadow on all sides and the full light" in reference to the shadows but also the visible paths or Conversations at Night.
23rd Mar 2020 4:04pm
I couldn't find one fitting, will consider yours. Thank you for leaving your thoughts!
26th Mar 2020 3:34pm
