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I Wish (for all DUP pageworms) 💖🙏

I wish that I read your poems more carefully
I wish that I spent more time with you here
I wish that you saw more comments from me

I wish that I would hurry up and get back to
some poems to enjoy them, already!
I wish that you could see more of how
I feel about you and get clearer feedback

I wish that you could understand what drives
my personal visibility and choices of avatars, etc
I wish that I was more relatable and comforting
I wish that I would become more enlightened and
enlightening
I wish that I would be a better poet.... already
Many tower over me
and rightly so....

(thank you for encouraging this beginner!)

I wish that you could see how grateful I am...
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