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Anger
Kisses deep, gut hauling
hands mauling, shivering
erections on my body
all over, stabbing, prodding
all orifice used, no mercy
Just stabbing and thrusting
my mind crawled
my soul screamed
in anger, enough! enough!
Let me go...silent screams
echo and rebound
in the walls of mind's hell
Groping I grasped
a shiny knife
all nine inches of it
slashed, cut, stabbed
gouged, furrowed, sliced
Standing in the middle of the floor
I watched in silence
as five bodies no longer moved
lazily allow crimson liquid flow
and became just flesh in bloody confusion....
hands mauling, shivering
erections on my body
all over, stabbing, prodding
all orifice used, no mercy
Just stabbing and thrusting
my mind crawled
my soul screamed
in anger, enough! enough!
Let me go...silent screams
echo and rebound
in the walls of mind's hell
Groping I grasped
a shiny knife
all nine inches of it
slashed, cut, stabbed
gouged, furrowed, sliced
Standing in the middle of the floor
I watched in silence
as five bodies no longer moved
lazily allow crimson liquid flow
and became just flesh in bloody confusion....
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8th Jan 2012 11:15pm
Beautiful.
8th Jan 2012 11:53pm
I could read each line and feel the tension boiling. Very expressive, all I could see was red and gore. :)
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re: Beautiful.
9th Jan 2012 1:35pm
Thank you dear Chandler, for being here, reading and commenting. If I had dared.
I remember this
9th Jan 2012 1:05am
re: I remember this
9th Jan 2012 1:36pm
Thank you dear Paul for reading and leaving your comment, as always. Oh yes. They do. Deserve it.
A.........
9th Jan 2012 11:59am
.......truly violent outburst beautifully written. Wrath to the unjust. Powerful!
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re: A.........
9th Jan 2012 1:38pm
Dear MusicallyMrM, thank you so much for dropping by and reading. Yes. After undergoing suppression for so long one can rise up and kill.
:)
9th Jan 2012 9:14pm
Grace
I could see you. There.
Fuming. :)
Beautifully expressed.
Has a mild lyricism to it.
:)
S'
I could see you. There.
Fuming. :)
Beautifully expressed.
Has a mild lyricism to it.
:)
S'
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re: :)
9th Jan 2012 9:44pm
Didn't know you has it in you
9th Jan 2012 10:08pm
Raw expressions create the best work.
You are putting work out simultaneously.
Keep it up in order to move on.
Hugs
You are putting work out simultaneously.
Keep it up in order to move on.
Hugs
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re: Didn't know you has it in you
9th Jan 2012 10:42pm
Dear Kym, thank you so much for dropping in, reading and commenting. Those words, yes, it lurks within; just anger we need to contain. Hugs!!