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The Consequences of Babylon
He gave self righteous testimony
His fervered rise, climbed high above the consequences of Babylon
"I command ye, to gaze apon the desolation of Set!"
The shiny dimes of his eyes gleaned prophecy
The good people had groped blasphemy like midnight lovers
A metabolic tremble played a percussion of gnashing teeth
Those who had kept hearts like lions
Now sacrificed like lambs
"Find us Lord! We are lost!"
Came the desperate cries of grown men like children....
"Take my baby! He is innocent!"
Shouted frantic Mothers considering original sin
His far gone look turned to a mountain
The people saw their reflection in his crazed steely focus of iris
Was this the perception of God?
And what would become of them if they chose not to believe?
They shuddered the repercussions
And bowed down to serve
His fervered rise, climbed high above the consequences of Babylon
"I command ye, to gaze apon the desolation of Set!"
The shiny dimes of his eyes gleaned prophecy
The good people had groped blasphemy like midnight lovers
A metabolic tremble played a percussion of gnashing teeth
Those who had kept hearts like lions
Now sacrificed like lambs
"Find us Lord! We are lost!"
Came the desperate cries of grown men like children....
"Take my baby! He is innocent!"
Shouted frantic Mothers considering original sin
His far gone look turned to a mountain
The people saw their reflection in his crazed steely focus of iris
Was this the perception of God?
And what would become of them if they chose not to believe?
They shuddered the repercussions
And bowed down to serve
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 12th Mar 2020
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Re. The consequences of Babylon
12th Mar 2020 10:41pm
Damn sister this is pure exposure of worship through fear
An awesome( meaning terrifying)
God begging followers through feat
Nice work
"The metabolic tremble played a percussion of gnashing teeth"
Great line
An awesome( meaning terrifying)
God begging followers through feat
Nice work
"The metabolic tremble played a percussion of gnashing teeth"
Great line
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Re: Re. The consequences of Babylon
12th Mar 2020 10:43pm
Thank you doll....the Cult of Personality is a force that challenges the strongest of convictions.....fear breeds
Re: Re. The consequences of Babylon
12th Mar 2020 10:46pm
Re. The Consequences of Babylon
12th Mar 2020 11:22pm
Damn, this reminds me of cults like Jim Jones, etc. It hits you dead in the gut and serves as a reminder that no one is above human behaviour. Very powerful and emotive write, Jennifer. Best of luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
12th Mar 2020 11:24pm
Re. The Consequences of Babylon
Gin, charisma leads blind followers over the precipice of eternity into the abyss. But you said it with words that echoed in the chambers of my soul. You don’t flinch from the dark realities of life. And your vocabulary and use of language are astonishing. You are a visionary and this prophecy is unfolding before our very eyes. John
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Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
13th Mar 2020 3:25pm
Re. The Consequences of Babylon
Dear Jen... you had me at the title. I often marveled at your religious insights when you’d write. When your knowledge would (and still does) take s reader just about anywhere.
( awesome photo )
( awesome photo )
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Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
13th Mar 2020 3:27pm
Thank you so much Jade....that makes me very proud
I found the photo first, it inspired the piece, I loooove creepy vintage images!
I found the photo first, it inspired the piece, I loooove creepy vintage images!
Re. The Consequences of Babylon
14th Mar 2020 9:12pm
I was only this morning reading the story of Shadrach, Mesech and Abednego, who resisted the worship of Nebuchadnezzar's statue (implicitly worshipping the king himself), an early example of an imposed cult of personality. This picture could be of Nebuchadnezzar in early 20th century setting.
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Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
15th Mar 2020 7:21pm
Re. The Consequences of Babylon
17th Mar 2020 6:19am
Pure Power and Provocation.
I LOATHE Dogma ......
but without it, this Work of Art wouldnt exist ............
I LOATHE Dogma ......
but without it, this Work of Art wouldnt exist ............
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18th Mar 2020 4:19am
Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
18th Mar 2020 11:14am
Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
18th Mar 2020 11:17am
Re: Re. The Consequences of Babylon
18th Mar 2020 11:17am
PS: I never liked this charade of
Monopoly on "Original Sin" ....
If it ain't Original, what's it worth sinning?
Monopoly on "Original Sin" ....
If it ain't Original, what's it worth sinning?
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18th Mar 2020 9:07pm