horse is broken

Oh I would love to be able to read this, nomoth.  Could you possibly edit the multimedia and select "Yes" to the visual poem option? That would make it much larger!  It will appear as the last question under the image before you hit 'Submit'!  You may have to reupload the image to do that!  But it would be worth it!

Edit. Just wow!

yep just found it. thanks. i was a little confused there.

feels the inner core & depths ...in a wildly galloping liberative run...with all the bleeding  pain-laden heart &   torn exteriors... still the soulsun flaming ... i feel the indomitably racing a lively warm oozing moistly wind in lightspeed,  however darkly in undulations the path & piercing coldness be...juz me nomoth...excellent verbiage & delivery overall... best to you in comp :)

Thank you again Uma. again blown away by you.

Good luck to you for the comp. also.

Your writing achieves in a dozen words what it takes me a hundred to labor toward. I love the detail, your word choices are adroit and mellifluous. I find myself reading it over and again, in admiration for your ability. Astounding, my friend. 🙏

I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. Audio poems add dimension with your unique vocal inflection and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site and inspire new friendships. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:

undergroundoutloud@outlook.com

Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.

In kindness,
Daniel

That is really kind and so not true (re: your and my writing). Your writing is like a  beautiful adventurous voyage across an ocean, mine is a sad introspective bus ride to the shops. I look up to you and your writing so much and I have much to aspire to. (including your psychically  compelling critiques.)

As for a recording. I would like to,  so give us a bit more time. Thanks so much for the offer and yes the podcast is so good and improving every episode and i would love to contribute. I will get back to you on that.

Thanks Daniel again.

Again the emotive high within this particular Write, but done subtle-that takes a true union with a particular emotion or tap to it.
It bleeds through with ease, You've quite a command with the pen.
Falling in love with Your Ink -Thank You (I have learned this prior, then I space out and wander...christ forgive me lol)

Thanks so much Gabe. The feeling is definitely mutual.

so very honored and encouraged.