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My greatest fuck
Raging waters surpass me
Goosebumps prickle my skin
Excitement fills me
Right up to the brim
Comforted by the feel of you
You've thickened up my walls
You are my delicious treat
You have me on all fours
I didn't think I could take you in
Because you're so thick and wide
Oh what a surprise
And the build-up is so intense
I'd say you've won first prize
Nobody can do me like you can
Oh and that girth is something to mention
You make sexing anyone else
Completely out of the question
Stroke me so skillfully
And fill me up
You are my everything
My greatest fuck.
Goosebumps prickle my skin
Excitement fills me
Right up to the brim
Comforted by the feel of you
You've thickened up my walls
You are my delicious treat
You have me on all fours
I didn't think I could take you in
Because you're so thick and wide
Oh what a surprise
And the build-up is so intense
I'd say you've won first prize
Nobody can do me like you can
Oh and that girth is something to mention
You make sexing anyone else
Completely out of the question
Stroke me so skillfully
And fill me up
You are my everything
My greatest fuck.
Published 2nd Mar 2020
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2nd Mar 2020 1:03am
Oh..la..la..I am feeling the entangled vibes of this gem, nice work my sweetness
2nd Mar 2020 3:57am
2nd Mar 2020 6:29am
A man would find that an earthy compliment having his prowess in the bedroom described like that.
3rd Mar 2020 1:39am
4th Mar 2020 2:43pm
Subperb erotic write.
This is the reason why. It was painted with careful metaphoric strokes that carried me in its romantic flow...then BANG!
The last line was the reality of of a 'good scerw' defined.
Tremendous write.
This is the reason why. It was painted with careful metaphoric strokes that carried me in its romantic flow...then BANG!
The last line was the reality of of a 'good scerw' defined.
Tremendous write.
4th Mar 2020 3:48pm
Aw thanku very much snugglebuck for taking the time to read and comment.
Thnx everyone else as well.
Thnx everyone else as well.
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
5th Mar 2020 2:55pm
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6th Mar 2020 1:38am
9th Mar 2020 11:30pm
Let that thing get busted wide open. You can give it medical attention afterwards.
12th Mar 2020 10:50am
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17th Mar 2020 5:07am
Cheers for the comment. I've had no real training in Erotica so that makes me happy lol.
17th Mar 2020 5:08am
7th Apr 2020 1:39am
I think it stated the obvious. It is an ego boosting piece for your man so that he can walk around with his chest out like a silver back gorilla thinking he's the best.
