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”Friday Freestyle...”
Yo...I got that, “In the moment”
meth-ed “off the dome” freestyle...
still equipped to spit ill will
that’ll hit bones’ depth home
n’ all just to make ‘em smile
I word whiff-ease as these lines
matter lather like foam
to the chrome after while
Watch the crowd
gather as they pile
n’ glare where
starry-eyed wonder
scrapes their minds bare
spare none as I spill my guile
ever cognizant of copious
cads coyly coppin’ inklets
of cathartic couplets covered
in rhyme, possibly becomin’
conversation fodder for a couple of
‘verse coppers’ claimin’ ownership
for what’s been explicitly expelled
from a gifted MIND
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 21st Feb 2020
Author's Note
I’m at the beginning stages of doing Audio Poetry for a group including my real life brothers n friends for a podcast they started up, n just decided to share this 😊
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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I do hope you share the podcast link! Would love to hear this recorded. Some of the alliteration is off the chart! Curious to see how you pull this off!
That final stanza illustrates perfectly what can happen when out there in the spotlight! There's a price to pay for success!
That final stanza illustrates perfectly what can happen when out there in the spotlight! There's a price to pay for success!
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21st Feb 2020 9:17pm
Aaawww... truly, I agree there’s always a price!
N yea I’ve been tryin to tie the audio to YouTube so far still tryin lol
N yea I’ve been tryin to tie the audio to YouTube so far still tryin lol
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2020 9:42pm
Hey there!
We have a podcast right here on the DU... would you be interested in allowing us to play this on a future episode? If you’re interested in submitting any other audio you can send it our way at undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
You can check out the podcast here: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/podcasts/
😁
-M
We have a podcast right here on the DU... would you be interested in allowing us to play this on a future episode? If you’re interested in submitting any other audio you can send it our way at undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
You can check out the podcast here: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/podcasts/
😁
-M
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21st Feb 2020 10:06pm
Hello, yea u can play it as for any others I will take it under consideration... thanks for the visit! :)
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2020 10:07pm
Thanks. I’ll add it to our upcoming list :)
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22nd Feb 2020 2:06am
WOOOOOOWWW... never thought I’d hear from u again, but I’m happy to be wrong! lol... thank u so much sweetie 😊
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11th Apr 2020 11:08am
My pleasure! If you get a chance, check out my latest freestyle. I've never tried it before until yesterday!
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