Haiku/Senryu, Nr.01 — I Promise ...

Hello Shiva, and thank you for your kind comment; glad it sparked a positive response in you.
And welcome to DUP - I hope you find it an enjoyable experience here. Look forward to reading some of your poetry. Best regards, Josh.

Awww. It exudes the desire for another to embrace whatever the day brings, even if it means stepping aside. That is truly love.

Thank you Johnny - nothing would please me more than a big breakthrough with her writing - after many years plugging away at it.

Pure devotion to the one you love, beautifully written. Sometimes the smallest poems say the greatest things. A wonderful write

Thank you very much for your kind comment, and RL, Shakti. And welcome to DUP. Best regards, Josh.

Thank you Josh for the warm welcome, I look forward to reading more of your work :)

Thank you so much; Josh.

Dear J,

The purest of love when one can let go let fly. This is wonderfully brilliant in its brevity but so impactful in meaning and gracious in spirit. Truly lovely write and so apropos on this Valentine’s day. I wish you a happy one! Excellent write . H🌷

Thank you H for your kind words, and the RL; all the best, Josh.

The essence of pure love, unselfish, giving and allowing.
Pure joy to read something short and yet impactful.

Thank you Layla, and for the RL. Glad you liked it. Have a wonderful day, Josh.

Oh, my heart! I've just read a bunch of lovey Valentines poems, and this is the first one that made me catch my breath. This selflessness is the true essence of it all.

She is a lucky woman, Josh. Have yourselves a beautiful day. ❤

Thank you BT for your kind comment, and RL. I'm also a very lucky guy  :))

A beautiful representation of the spirit of love. Nicely done, Josh.

Thank you Eerie; glad you liked it. Wishing you the best, Josh.

They don’t make them like you anymore... dear soul !

Blessings to you and yours... 🌻

Thank you shadow, your comment and blessing much appreciated. - I'm just an old-fashioned English guy  :))   (possibly born in the wrong era).

really beautiful Josh.

perfect.

Thank you nomoth for commenting; I'm really glad it went down well with you.

Sincere and honest, to let the other person see the light.
Nicely done sir.

Thank you Wally; you got the essence in one there. Have a nice week-end; Josh.

very nice my friend

Thank you Vandel; really nice of you to drop by this way again. Cheers, Josh.

I so love this! Cutting straight to the marrow on this one.💜,  R.

Thank you Rachel, andfor the RL too. Glad the poem reached deep  

Thank you - I'm always encouraged when I see people take off doing their own creative thing, and engaging with the world on their own authentic terms.