Sunrise (Reveille)

nicely spilled i love the early sunrise when you can just roll right into it and feel the warmth against your skin of your flesh LOL...respect dear poetess

Glad you enjoyed me
and your sunrise so fully;
Sunset may be fun.

yes i did enjoy you cant wait for the sunset which is very beautiful no matter were it takes place...respect

My place is just where
I am taken, regardless
of time or weather

thats even better wink with a smile...respect

It does tend to find
favour amongst the assertive
gentlemen around

I know that's a good thing southern accent comfort...respect

my only accent
is acute one of course, she
smiled endearingly

hummm...i can go for that a smile upon your precious lips with respect

merci

FOSHO dear poetess wink...respect

two winks and two smiles
would be even better, I
like to think - giggles

I like your style of thinking clearly and consciously deep..respect dear poetess

Ahh those sunrises!
Inviting when awaking

An invitation
to dance is more often
than not a pleasure

Such a dreamy start to a day,
when rooster gets to stay ;)

usually the
rooster ends up as soup, it
seems (licking her lips)

sweet work as the sun peeks the crest of the hills and your thrill on of the morning touch is such a beautiful start of the day

well done  

The warmth of sun
on the crest of hills also
affects deep valleys

sunrise and high tide...a powerful combo-imagination...you certainly know how to add a sensual dimension to natural phenomena...very nice.....

You are very kind
nature and sensual action
seem to fit closely

An eye-opener,  SweetOblivion.  Lovely eroticism.

Always nice to find
a gentleman open in
heart, mind and trousers

Sunrise is made all the deeper with slap and tickle. How unique is your metaphor. There is a sloping into paradise here.,

XoXoXo
John

There may be verses
to be found in your kind words,
If you do not mind?

Of course ye may. In fact this is the most exciting comment reply I’ve been privileged to rceieve. In giviving I receive. ;)

XoXoXo
John

Thank you - I will see what I can do

You brought me a grin by the second line and it remained on my face through to the end — only to be accompanied by an evil little giggle...no one compares to you, beautiful SO - especially when scripting these types of “cultural” writes 😉 - I’ve missed reading you - I’m glad I took the pain pill before logging in 😆- allowing the mind to relax a bit...😌

Xoxo Taryn

hugs - sorry things are horrid for you right now - wishing you well soon

Sunrise means its not even morning yet. Somewhere between a blist

Half way from dreams

The perfect pre-breakfast appetizer. Such a woman as this is everyman's dream. Sunrise lends itself well to your theme.

XoXoXo
John

the payback can be
so fun too she smiled
and ran off to hide

Morning sex tends to be the best session of the day 😉 beyond that the scene you depicted was very inticing and then visceral and sexy. Great write!

Your comments have inspired me to pick up my pen and play with a few half written drafts - thank you for drawing me from my lethargy.

I'm glad to be of service. Looking forward forward to reading more of your work!