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A Train
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A woman dressed in gray ...
Asleep
A dark train carriage
Fantasy
The black exterior landscape
Sudden empathy
She must be depressive
So depressive ... that she does not exist
Then she is my type
Sweet depravity ...
A station... Another station ...
Passing like my spermatozoons
In the erotic dream ...
That I have inserted in her desolation.
... ... ... ...
A woman dressed in gray ...
Asleep
A dark train carriage
Fantasy
The black exterior landscape
Sudden empathy
She must be depressive
So depressive ... that she does not exist
Then she is my type
Sweet depravity ...
A station... Another station ...
Passing like my spermatozoons
In the erotic dream ...
That I have inserted in her desolation.
... ... ... ...
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Re. A Train
23rd Jan 2020 2:16am
At some stage, we all wait at that platform for the train to arrive, as many come & go in between the one we’re meant to board.
Depravity, isn’t a bad thing when harnessed appropriately for mutual pleasure... 🌻🌻🌻
Depravity, isn’t a bad thing when harnessed appropriately for mutual pleasure... 🌻🌻🌻
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Re. A Train
Thank you for reading it. Thank your for your comment.
Maybe you misunderstood the poem;... the stations pass by outside *our* rolling train.
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Maybe you misunderstood the poem;... the stations pass by outside *our* rolling train.
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Re. A Train
24th Jan 2020 11:46pm
Re: Re. A Train
25th Jan 2020 2:45pm
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Re. A Train
An erotic write as the stations pass by,
"Passing like my spermatozoons
In the erotic dream ...
That I have inserted in her desolation. "
Oh yes inserting, very nice.
"So depressive ... that she does not exist"
I have often spoke in terms of my nonexistent existence.
"Passing like my spermatozoons
In the erotic dream ...
That I have inserted in her desolation. "
Oh yes inserting, very nice.
"So depressive ... that she does not exist"
I have often spoke in terms of my nonexistent existence.
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Re: Re. A Train
9th Mar 2020 11:30pm