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The tale of scar
bright at midnight,
and those shooting
stars reminiscent of
dark in dawns'
rising sun,
rivers of tulips
and barley corn.
trails of old oak
seeds beneath
muddied feet,
listen,
in the distance
snowflakes glisten
in tides of white,
swept ashore
are those pond
fish covered in
ice.
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Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 5:54pm
Wow, Mommyjo! That's some really nice poetry you've written there :)
The imagery is absolutely stunning... just gorgeous. It's very expressive, and full of emotion... and overall, it just flows really smoothly. You're an amazing writer! <3
The imagery is absolutely stunning... just gorgeous. It's very expressive, and full of emotion... and overall, it just flows really smoothly. You're an amazing writer! <3
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Re: Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 6:00pm
Re: Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 6:04pm
At first there was a poem displayed, but now it is just a picture. Remove the picture, and instead of choosing the visual poem option, choose add image... that way both the text and the image will be shown.
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Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 6:45pm
This is dripping with emotion and vivid imagery. i look forward to more of your work.
Welcome to DUP.
Welcome to DUP.
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Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 6:58pm
a thought of broken love yet reflections of changes of the seasons of dark and loneliness of feelings, yet still felt with sadness and regret of an encounter that should of not meet leaving behind the tale of scar nicely composed...respect
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20th Jan 2020 7:57pm
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20th Jan 2020 8:30pm
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20th Jan 2020 8:32pm
Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 10:14pm
You set me up!!
in Your profile, You said You are not a poet or don't do poetry or something very similar to this effect!!
This is exquisite!!
Now am gonna have to follow Your ink to see if this 1st spill is just a fluke
in Your profile, You said You are not a poet or don't do poetry or something very similar to this effect!!
This is exquisite!!
Now am gonna have to follow Your ink to see if this 1st spill is just a fluke
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Re: Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 10:17pm
I am on another poetry site meet me there if you want, my name is in chains, if not ill be writing another one soon
Re: Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 10:18pm
i am a member on 3 other sites, as well, but only write here atm.
I will wait.......
I will wait.......
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Re: Re. The tale of scar
20th Jan 2020 10:27pm
Re. The tale of scar
I’m looking forward to reading more of you after such a lovely example, dear Jo.🌷
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
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Re. The tale of scar
21st Jan 2020 10:21pm