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Home-bound
from a dragon’s cage
my spirit at the window cries
to be set free and escape
where the sky awaits
I see the moon’s rise
long before the sun relents
behind clouds it will set
in magenta’s blush
Published 19th Jan 2020
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DCLXVI_1989’s “Your Sky”.
DCLXVI_1989’s “Your Sky”.
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19th Jan 2020 2:43am
19th Jan 2020 5:51am
You’re always so terribly kind, my dear Kitty sister. And thank you, I’m glad you like my two ‘bound’ short free verse writes.
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
19th Jan 2020 1:50pm
i like this piece so magical the vision carried by each smooth word spoken taking one home bound set free from the cage...respect
20th Jan 2020 4:17am
Indeed, so it is, my brother. You now have flown with the dragon.
RL gratitude🙏🏻
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RL gratitude🙏🏻
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20th Jan 2020 12:16pm
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20th Jan 2020 3:43am
Nicely done Ms. Jade. I imagine (from the comp's instructions) you opened your windows, looked at the moon and penned this feeling the cool air.
Good luck in the comp!
Good luck in the comp!
20th Jan 2020 6:30am
Thank you, my friend... the nights have been living creatures one can revive from.
🐾🌛
🐾🌛
21st Jan 2020 6:17am
Dear JP,
“my spirit at the window cries
to be set free and escape ” I feel the wind through my hair and cold air on my face taking flight. I love these lines. The whole poem is beautiful but those lines have moved me upward. Good luck in the comp and gorgeous write. H🌷
“my spirit at the window cries
to be set free and escape ” I feel the wind through my hair and cold air on my face taking flight. I love these lines. The whole poem is beautiful but those lines have moved me upward. Good luck in the comp and gorgeous write. H🌷
I’m overwhelmed, dear Honoria. To have anything I’ve uttered be uplifting is a profound honor.🙏🏻
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21st Jan 2020 1:38pm
This is beautiful, Jade...
Lovely writing, as usual, poetess ❤️
Best of luck in the comp!
Lovely writing, as usual, poetess ❤️
Best of luck in the comp!
21st Jan 2020 7:46pm
