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Coming Before The Quivers Of A Quiet Storm
Coming before the quivers of the quiet storm
Eyes closed, breathless in the intake
Instilling the depth of self-love ramification as I lay in the throne of my humbly madness
Emotionally purifying me, unto my temple, a beautiful flush permeates the flow of slow drips
Spiritually falling I become the epitome of releasing until the ether
Seeking to destroy life toxics that has dethroned the essence of my body
Draining the residue that seek to hide, to weaken, to impact
Mm... as my burden lessens who each stream of pleasure, I solemn release you into the hereafter
The fierce rain pushing, depleting, emptying
Recoursed in it remains, the burden of gluttonous, weaning, disbursing in its twisting awakening
As you asunder and withdrawal from the passage the oppressive means to align the body and mind
The outcome can no longer deny the will of the soul to ascend
Renew of spirit as I prowl in the deep completion of my pleasurably journey
Once again, submitting unto the quivers of the quiet storm
Eyes closed, breathless in the intake
Instilling the depth of self-love ramification as I lay in the throne of my humbly madness
Emotionally purifying me, unto my temple, a beautiful flush permeates the flow of slow drips
Spiritually falling I become the epitome of releasing until the ether
Seeking to destroy life toxics that has dethroned the essence of my body
Draining the residue that seek to hide, to weaken, to impact
Mm... as my burden lessens who each stream of pleasure, I solemn release you into the hereafter
The fierce rain pushing, depleting, emptying
Recoursed in it remains, the burden of gluttonous, weaning, disbursing in its twisting awakening
As you asunder and withdrawal from the passage the oppressive means to align the body and mind
The outcome can no longer deny the will of the soul to ascend
Renew of spirit as I prowl in the deep completion of my pleasurably journey
Once again, submitting unto the quivers of the quiet storm
Published 18th Jan 2020
Author's Note
I recorded this poem on my cell phone while getting my monthly colon cleansed, since I’m now in training for the 2020 marathon season. First half marathon in March
SKC
SKC
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18th Jan 2020 2:49am
I read this poem all serious-like and then I read the author's note and burst into laughter. Thanks for that, SKC! Lol
18th Jan 2020 2:54am
Got you there huh.. however, thank you sincerely for taking the time to read and then adding such an uplifting comment even I can smile about, it's late, therefore, please enjoy the remainder of your evening and I bid you a very nice weekend as well
18th Jan 2020 4:24am
I don't think that experience has ever been described in such a way. Some serious skill to this in light of the back story.
18th Jan 2020 2:09pm
I am graceful you find my poem ..ah... interesting to read and that goes double for commenting, which I'm earnestly appreciative, please enjoy your Saturday and your weekend in general my tender poet
18th Jan 2020 7:46am
Echo Tenderloin (nearest I had to this was one given before an endoscopy in hospital, nothing abnormal found BTW). Before I read the footnote I thought this was describing a self-pleasuring as I had recently been reading an article about health benefits of orgasms, titled risquely 'Health benefits of regular visits to the peak district'.
18th Jan 2020 2:13pm
Well good morning to you, and thank you for reading and them commenting with such informative tidbits in regards to your article reading on Health, being a nurse I do like to be kept abreast, and I hope you are having a relaxing day and may you have a blessed Sunday church service as well
18th Jan 2020 1:24pm
18th Jan 2020 2:16pm
Well hello to you stranger, I hope my response find you in good health and in good spirits, in addition, thank you taking the time to grace my page and the sweet accolade, do enjoy this day, be fruitful, and have a great weekend as well
19th Jan 2020 11:50pm
sweet way to remember a poem
before and after a good cleaning HA HA
well done
before and after a good cleaning HA HA
well done
19th Jan 2020 11:57pm
That is a good one...and thank you for the read and comment.. Have a super evening and a great week as well
20th Jan 2020 9:08am
Like a dream or fantasy. As if these are the thoughts of something wanted, desires, but left unfulfilled. The mind is the strongest sex organ.
Fun read
Fun read
20th Jan 2020 2:40pm
I am so thrilled you found the sweetest humor in this poem, and I thank you in reverence for the comment. Enjoy the beginning of your week my poet
