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Orange Crush

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I got a crush on you that rots my teeth,
It’s been this way for years it’s nothing new.
It flows over the top and underneath,
I suck it through a straw the taste of you.

The way you make me feel can’t be denied,
I got a crush on you that rots my teeth!
That bursts my bubbles from a sugar high,
My love of soda orange I here bequeath.

I take you in my mouth like toffee Heath,
A love undone each choc’let Hershey kiss.
I got a crush on you that rots my teeth,
I crave your creaminess I can’t resist!

My plans will be for Valentine’s this year,
So sweet a filling skeptics will believe!
See’s candy will all say ‘I heart you dear’,
I got a crush on you that rots my teeth!
 
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
Published | Edited 17th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Entered in EdibleWords’ “Valentine Crushing Time”.
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