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Winter Chills
she sits
in the cool
confines
of herself
no matter
how warm
her body
temperature
her breath
is a mist
of cold
without another
to offer
warmth
in the cool
confines
of herself
no matter
how warm
her body
temperature
her breath
is a mist
of cold
without another
to offer
warmth
Published 10th Jan 2020
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10th Jan 2020 2:11am
Breathtakingly simple in it's complexity. That image enhances it; however, it certainly stands on its own as well.
16th Jan 2020 1:16am
Thank you so much Ahavati for your thoughtful comments.. always greatly appreciated .. humbled and honored by the add to your RL
JeJe ox
JeJe ox
10th Jan 2020 3:20am
Excellent jemac. Simple, straight forward and powerful in its image.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Jan 2020 1:17am
Thank you so much buddhakitty for your thoughtful comments .. greatly appreciated
hugs to you,
JeJe
hugs to you,
JeJe
10th Jan 2020 7:13am
16th Jan 2020 1:18am
Powerful and relatable image. I can see her lone figures outline, feel her breaths treble the air, misting in smooth, silent exhalations. 🙏🏻
16th Jan 2020 1:19am
Thank you so much Daniel for your thoughtful comments .. always appreciated
JeJe
JeJe
10th Jan 2020 9:06pm
16th Jan 2020 1:21am
Thank you so much Josh for your wonderful comments .. always greatly appreciated, as was the add to your RL .. humbled and honored by the gesture
All the best to you in 2020,
JeJe
All the best to you in 2020,
JeJe
