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HAIKU - AIR BYB
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 5th Jan 2020
| Edited 8th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A solo, beautiful Monarch buterfly was dancing through my backyard today. I looked up their migratory timelines and found that Monarchs should now be hybernating in Mrexico...hence my write. The title Backyard ballroom, of course.
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Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
5th Jan 2020 11:40pm
That's so interesting. I'm glad you enclosed the author's note by taking the time to look up on their migration trail. I always find it so fascinating how animals, insects have that instinct to go where their ancestors have gone and then come back again. You've captured it so well GW in your haiku.
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Re: Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 4:22pm
That innate instinct is fascinating to me as well. I am going to plant some milkweed, their recommended source of food, in my garden and see if more will stop by. There's an awesome hibernation spot for Monarchs at Natural Bridges beach in Santa Cruz, California. I miss my visits there.
http://www.parks.ca.gov/?page_id=541
http://www.parks.ca.gov/?page_id=541
Re: Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 7:49pm
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Re: Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 7:55pm
Thank you so much, Hrshykss! I am glad you like the piece. The title wad a fun thought. I know the form doesn't typically have titles but since something is required for submission I figure what the hell, I'll have fun with it. Thank you,again, for your kind words 🙏💜
Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 6:05am
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Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 7:34am
Butterflies are all but glimpses of fleeting beauty.
Happy New Year, friend.
Losty
💜
Happy New Year, friend.
Losty
💜
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Re: Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
6th Jan 2020 8:00pm
Merci Beaucoup, Losty! They are indeed nature's delicate yet tenacious inspirations. 💜🙏
Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
8th Jan 2020 00:36am
i love the thought of this little winged beastie deciding to take the scenic route.
a beautiful observation 💕💖💕
a beautiful observation 💕💖💕
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Re: Re. HAIKU - AIR BYB
8th Jan 2020 00:58am
Scenic route? You obviously have never seen my backyard 😁 I actually was thrilled to see the little aviator...made my day calmer. I too am glad they chose the scenic route. I appreciate you mon amie 💜🙏