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SENRYU - UNTAPPED MAGIC
Fascination lost
tedious, flavorless life
brass rings left ungrabbed
tedious, flavorless life
brass rings left ungrabbed
Published 26th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Time was that carousels/merry-go-rounds had brass ring dispensers. The child/child-at-heart would stretch, grasp the ring, and toss it into a clown's mouth; at least a clowns mouth at Santa Cruz Boardwalk. I now think it's poignant that one had to stretch to grab the prized ring Happiness and fulfillment in life requires desire and effort.
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26th Dec 2019 2:43am
26th Dec 2019 2:51am
I'm sorry Titanium! Not too late to grab that festive brass rings 😁 Happy Holidays by the by climb up that tree and sing Christmas carols for the whole neighborhood
1st Jan 2020 1:05pm
can't do much about rings...
... had they been brass balls tho 🤔
it's good to read you mon ami
... had they been brass balls tho 🤔
it's good to read you mon ami
2nd Jan 2020 10:49pm
