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Apartment Life Right Before Dawn
Still dark
Winter
Sitting by an open window
Cool breeze
Hot radiator clanks
Hot and cold juxtaposing each other
Possibly a life metaphor
It's quiet
No people talking
No dogs barking
Sirens silent until their not
Capturing this moment
Appreciation
Winter
Sitting by an open window
Cool breeze
Hot radiator clanks
Hot and cold juxtaposing each other
Possibly a life metaphor
It's quiet
No people talking
No dogs barking
Sirens silent until their not
Capturing this moment
Appreciation
Published 5th Jan 2020
Author's Note
It's why I get up early
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5th Jan 2020 12:11pm
i agree its the best time to rise no noise nor sounds just peace of the morning dawn nicely composed...respect
5th Jan 2020 12:13pm
5th Jan 2020 12:16pm
5th Jan 2020 2:45pm
Yeah, i get it PoetSpeak. Quiet and stillness for a bit before the madness of the day arrives. Good write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
5th Jan 2020 2:47pm
Anonymous
5th Jan 2020 3:36pm
There is a good argument for a simple elegance; your poem has just made it!
5th Jan 2020 4:40pm
Thank you Mister
It's steeped in my soul to get up early and catch the silence ....
It's steeped in my soul to get up early and catch the silence ....
5th Jan 2020 6:35pm
Huh.... I can't get the hang of early, but this captures why I stay up late! ;)
5th Jan 2020 6:54pm
5th Jan 2020 9:09pm
5th Jan 2020 9:24pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
6th Jan 2020 1:44am
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6th Jan 2020 1:48am
6th Jan 2020 3:12pm
I love the hiss of an old radiator. I lived in an apartment once that had them. They were my favorite thing about that place in the winter time.
6th Jan 2020 3:28pm
It’s old school in my place. It’s either too much or not enough heat. Lately way too much.
Super coming by later
The clank is cool though, I agree !
Super coming by later
The clank is cool though, I agree !
7th Jan 2020 1:55am
I am an early riser as well. Im also thee most morningest morning person ever. My girls today me that! <3
7th Jan 2020 2:59am
7th Jan 2020 9:49pm
a very beautiful moment dearest Poet
I savor them the in between times...
Happy New Year my friend...
love Brenda ❤
I savor them the in between times...
Happy New Year my friend...
love Brenda ❤
7th Jan 2020 11:06pm
Is it the silence that people relate to ?
Silence is rare here
A treasure
Happy New Year Queen Poetess
X
Silence is rare here
A treasure
Happy New Year Queen Poetess
X
8th Jan 2020 6:01am
Happy New Year cowboy.
May it be filled with many more precious, little moments.
Losty 💜
May it be filled with many more precious, little moments.
Losty 💜
8th Jan 2020 1:01pm
Happy New Year Losty
Nice to see you
Thx for stopping by in my steam heat logic observations ....
X
Nice to see you
Thx for stopping by in my steam heat logic observations ....
X
8th Jan 2020 6:01pm
It's the little things that we can have to capture, take in and appreciate, especially at those early hours when everyone is still asleep.
Great write Poet.
Great write Poet.
8th Jan 2020 6:53pm
Thx Wally
This poem resonates with people more than my sex poems.
I guess it’s a different kind of heat ..
This poem resonates with people more than my sex poems.
I guess it’s a different kind of heat ..
