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In the Air
My love is always there
hanging in the air
Lingering in your mind
Feeling the gentle kiss
Having sent the rain to touch your lips
Or the words I will speak
to watch you shed your cloak,
becoming naked and free
Igniting the beast you hold back
to be free in the presence of me
You'll find me by the fire,
naked, as my eyes become wild with desire
Making love to each other with such passion
that all that remains is ash
and coals flickering in the dusk
While our scent lingers in the air
hanging in the air
Lingering in your mind
Feeling the gentle kiss
Having sent the rain to touch your lips
Or the words I will speak
to watch you shed your cloak,
becoming naked and free
Igniting the beast you hold back
to be free in the presence of me
You'll find me by the fire,
naked, as my eyes become wild with desire
Making love to each other with such passion
that all that remains is ash
and coals flickering in the dusk
While our scent lingers in the air
Published 29th Dec 2019
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29th Dec 2019 6:16pm
the image of the "ash and coals"
vividly i can see this.
how my mind does rehearse the essence of the fire.
as it melts visions into my thoughts.
vividly i can see this.
how my mind does rehearse the essence of the fire.
as it melts visions into my thoughts.
29th Dec 2019 6:24pm
You are so kind to me dear poet. I'm pleased you experienced the vision I was hoping to get through✌
29th Dec 2019 6:23pm
29th Dec 2019 6:26pm
29th Dec 2019 7:09pm
Like the post coital picture created by the last lines:
Making love to each other with such passion
that all that remains is ash
and coals flickering in the dusk
While our scent lingers in the air
Making love to each other with such passion
that all that remains is ash
and coals flickering in the dusk
While our scent lingers in the air
29th Dec 2019 11:42pm
29th Dec 2019 8:02pm
29th Dec 2019 11:44pm
As are you my dear. Thank you for the lovely comment. You are appreciated.
Always🙏
Always🙏
29th Dec 2019 9:50pm
29th Dec 2019 11:46pm
Anonymous
1st Jan 2020 8:28am
What can I say my queen but wow....
1st Jan 2020 10:15pm
You don't have to say anything my King. I know you are the sunrise behind my ocean dear friend.
1st Jan 2020 10:13pm
Beeeaaautiful poem, Lagertha! The imagery was fantastic, your sincerity is clear, with lots of emotion...
Excellent poetry! I loved it :)
Excellent poetry! I loved it :)
1st Jan 2020 10:21pm
I appreciate you so very much NB! You are someone who has the positivity some of us need to feel. You are a beautiful writer and I cannot wait to start reading your work dear poet!
1st Jan 2020 10:27pm
Awww, thank you so much for that sweet and flattering comment compliment :)
You are a pleasure to read as well; keep up the great writing!
You are a pleasure to read as well; keep up the great writing!
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16th Jan 2020 1:49pm
Thanks Danny! You are always appreciated for your RL and comment. Thank you so much for the kind words.
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