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Surrounded
Surrounded in a month of love
lorn but not alone or abandoned
I am here, I am near
find me winding in the wind
brushing across your cheek
and in the stars shining behind your moon
in the wonders of life
in the little lessons that seem so big
in the telling moments
of who you are and who you will one day be
find me in the fields and in the stream,
where we frolic naked
alongside the trail to my heart
find me
in all you see and all you do for me
I will never fail
or never fear our darkness or our light
find me here, find me near
for the feeling that you find,
from me
surrounds you everywhere
lorn but not alone or abandoned
I am here, I am near
find me winding in the wind
brushing across your cheek
and in the stars shining behind your moon
in the wonders of life
in the little lessons that seem so big
in the telling moments
of who you are and who you will one day be
find me in the fields and in the stream,
where we frolic naked
alongside the trail to my heart
find me
in all you see and all you do for me
I will never fail
or never fear our darkness or our light
find me here, find me near
for the feeling that you find,
from me
surrounds you everywhere
Published 27th Dec 2019
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27th Dec 2019 3:12pm
Man, you are such a great writer. Surely I'm biased by your spiritual nature/love poems, but you write some great stuff! Those last three stanzas really spoke to me...
You're awesome, JusTim. I really connected with this one :)
You're awesome, JusTim. I really connected with this one :)
27th Dec 2019 5:31pm
28th Dec 2019 00:47am
28th Dec 2019 00:49am
Such a great piece Tim!👏
Love this part
"and in the stars shining behind your moon
in the wonders of life
in the little lessons that seem so big
in the telling moments
of who you are and who you will one day be "
So good 🙌
Love this part
"and in the stars shining behind your moon
in the wonders of life
in the little lessons that seem so big
in the telling moments
of who you are and who you will one day be "
So good 🙌
28th Dec 2019 4:52am
28th Dec 2019 9:58am
so many gorgeous lines
but this...
"find me winding in the wind
brushing across your cheek"
... evokes such a tender warmth
such permanence
that even in storms
siiiiiigh
how gorgeous
but this...
"find me winding in the wind
brushing across your cheek"
... evokes such a tender warmth
such permanence
that even in storms
siiiiiigh
how gorgeous
