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From the Chimney I See
intricate, delicate, beauty
slowly rising, effortlessly
from the chimney I see
clouds of dark
remnants of what was
becoming a new thing
that’s astounding
swirls of gray that touch the sky
harmoniously
what i’d give to be
above the rooftops, ascending
falling captive to the air
letting winds guide me
black and heavy
some say polluting
but from the chimney I see
puffs of a new beginning
slowly rising, effortlessly
from the chimney I see
clouds of dark
remnants of what was
becoming a new thing
that’s astounding
swirls of gray that touch the sky
harmoniously
what i’d give to be
above the rooftops, ascending
falling captive to the air
letting winds guide me
black and heavy
some say polluting
but from the chimney I see
puffs of a new beginning
Published 24th Dec 2019
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24th Dec 2019 11:39pm
I absolutely ❤ this perspective, how you see smoke as a new veginning; an offering of old transferring to something new!
26th Dec 2019 6:19pm
26th Dec 2019 6:42am
A beautiful and incredible visual poem! Your writing is captivating... This is truly a work of art. I absolutely loved it :)
26th Dec 2019 6:20pm
thank you for your support and kindness. When I incorporated chimney smoke in a previous poem it inspired me to write about it in a different light
26th Dec 2019 6:39pm
