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Dream
There you were again
in front of me, or was it behind
pressing in, I pressing back
no drifting off this time
we were still but still not still
I stirred, you drank
we bled, then sank
me into to you
a kaleidescope of colour
caressing each tiny bit
you bit and I chewed
on ever daring thought
I pressed deeper and pursued
you whispered
I love you
there was no need to go much further
for we were here
not frightened by the bear
or by the wolf
thru the forest we disappeared
eating morels and making love
in front of me, or was it behind
pressing in, I pressing back
no drifting off this time
we were still but still not still
I stirred, you drank
we bled, then sank
me into to you
a kaleidescope of colour
caressing each tiny bit
you bit and I chewed
on ever daring thought
I pressed deeper and pursued
you whispered
I love you
there was no need to go much further
for we were here
not frightened by the bear
or by the wolf
thru the forest we disappeared
eating morels and making love
Published 22nd Dec 2019
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22nd Dec 2019 4:12pm
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
22nd Dec 2019 5:35pm
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22nd Dec 2019 5:44pm
22nd Dec 2019 11:37pm
22nd Dec 2019 11:39pm
"we were still but still not still"...if that is not great poetry I will jump over the moon...beautiful ink Tim.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
23rd Dec 2019 4:02am
6th Apr 2020 7:39am
