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Red
you may have cut me deep
but I danced in each pool
of my own blood
and with each drop
I fell in love
but I danced in each pool
of my own blood
and with each drop
I fell in love
Published 20th Dec 2019
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20th Dec 2019 5:39pm
21st Dec 2019 9:46am
Learning to love yourself again is the most beautiful thing. Sad, but beautifully uplifting poetry. I truly enjoyed this, wizard. You're an expressive writer :)
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31st Dec 2019 1:29am
you punched hard in five lines. well penned. I love the imagery and feelings churned.
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13th Jan 2022 10:56pm
25th Oct 2022 10:15am
This poem speaks volume in a few lines. The pride and strength that emerge from the simple yet effective metaphor you used is uplifting. Well done!
Mundus
Mundus
7th May 2024 10:24pm
Powerful writing though brief. It shows strength of character.
Nice writing. I can see you've been here before. :)
Nice writing. I can see you've been here before. :)
